Darker Tones

Description of a feeling unknown

Allegedly the deepest depths, 

distant shoals uncharted yet.

I lust to settle in silent thirst, 

conceive myself

 yield

 converge. 

Inhale the deep green nebulous blue,

blending myself amidst the darker hues.

Sensitivity skitters upon barren bone,

Destructive

 ensnaring

 undertones.

Omniscient dark humble abode,

 Admirably my honest  home.

Author's Note

Open to any opinions, advice, and critique. Thank you!

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Creative prose stimulated from the sub-conscious psyche - good use of imagery and the wordplay is spot on! I think we need to see more of your imaginations shared on this site … top marks … :-)

[Yousra Alsubaihi]

It's amazing , I like it , when you have a new work I hope you tell me !!

[Crowley]

This has a really good tone and texture, it sucks the reader right into the feeling and washes them in the sepia tones and dark currents. Not desperate though, more like I'm comfortable in this space. I really enjoyed this.

[BrittZurg]

Thank you so much!!

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Oh wow, this is beautifully dark and haunting. I absolutely love the depth of soul in it.

"I lust to settle in silent thirst,
conceive myself
yield
converge" =perhaps the best lines of all within, but I loved all of them!

Wow, I love this, and can't wait to read more of you!! :)

[BrittZurg]

Oh my gosh thank you!! I've never put my writing out there and I was/am so nervous hahaha.

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Oh, I completely relate!! The first time I did was 5 months ago here, and I’m glad for it. I’ve gained a lot more confidence as a writer, received some great critique, made wonderful friends and been SO inspired reading other writers. I, for one, am glad you’re here and welcome you!! If you ever need a thought or would like me to read anything you’ve got, I’d be honored!! Likewise, if you’d like to poke around and look at my writing, I’d be just as honored to know your thoughts. Start with “Proclivity.” Take care! :)