Growing up

Just came to me

There's a time in every young girls life where some thing changes. Something clicks In every boys life and they no longer want to discover love. But they wAnt to discover her. Explore throughout the great temple of her body.
Her parents try to stop it. They hide her behind their shield. But when they aren't there, that's when she's the most venerable, the most open to attacks. In a blink of an eye there's thousands. They are shaped in many different sizes and look many different ways. And the choice. The choice is up to her. She can stay strong and fight them off, or she can take the road less traveled and face the consequences we all know are there.

Author's Note

~enjoy~

Reviews

[R.J. Blackwood]

well the basic story is good, it tries to really say something. but my advice is to pay more attention to the grammar and spelling. it is an distraction from the story.