You are the one to blame

This is a poem I wrote shortly after a love of mine cheated on me or the third time. I broke up with him after. I am finally in the final stages of getting over him. We lasted for 1 year. -enjoy-

I woke up in tears
Would you believe
I dreamt of all my fears
I reached out for someone,
anyone, but there was only air
I just want to run
Run away from my loneliness, and pain
When did you decide you where done?
Was it the first or second time you ran to her?
You said you didn't want to hurt me
How passionate you where.
You made the butterfly's in my stomach go wild.
But now the butterfly's have died,
And you, oh you my child
You are the one who is to blame
My heart is shattered, the feelings won't leave
You are the one that should feel shame
But you left that for me
Don't you see
You are the one to blame

Author's Note

I believe this cold have been written better, but I would like your input if you dot mind please.

Reviews

[lovetowrite]

This is a great prose. Well done