Pain of loss

My current thoughts

      Breathing is like  shattered glass
The guilt swallows me whole
The pain of loss struck me hard
Tumbling me to the floor
Has no one told you she's
not breathing?
Can't you see I'm not breathing?
Can't you feel the hole in my heart?

Reviews

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

pixieheart97 I do agree with! lols I love that song.

These peices was, in your words, saddening and reminds a fact to what you feel and think. In particular, this was great. And no doubt about it, I have felt this way too.

Thank you for the post.

[Hachamecha]

It does feel like shattered glass.... and as you breath it in, it pireces your heart...
nice:)

[Kaylor Mason]

Gosh . . . I can feel the victim of loss, reaching out for help as she's dying on the floor. It literally bleeds through the words with passion.

[Little Birdie]

Very sad.

[pixieheart97]

Has no one told you she's
not breathing?
Hello ,I am your mind, giving you someone to talk to
Hello
sorry thats just what it reminds me of..awesome though :D

[Sarah]

lovely work. you have used powerful words