Your Last Breath

I never meant

To act the way

I did that night

Now I would

Do anything

For what I had

That night

 

Before that night

I never realized

Just how much

I was taking

The little I had

For granted

 

Now you are there

Possibly taking

Your last breath

And I’m just realizing

Just how much

You loved and cared

And I was too foolish

To realize it 

Reviews

[Knoxxeh]

This is sad and I think we all have been to that point where we take somthing for granted and dont realize what we have till its gone
Great Write

[Awkward]

Short sad poem, Thank you for sharing.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This poem puts me in mind of perhaps one being the prodigal daughter.....whose parent is slipping away from this life. Excellent piece.

[Lover109]

awww, its cute and sad, i like it

[Rayne Stanton]

awww a really good yet total emotional puller poem. love it

[Samantha]

This is very good,
I love the part
(Now you are there
Possibly taking
Your last breath)
I felt...very sad. Like i'm the person thinking this and going through this event.

[The old me]

very cool. very deep feeling expressed and expressed well.