White Walls

White Walls

A Poem by Bridget McJane

      Empty cans bounce

Clanking chains dragging

Clocks chiming to midnight

Glass shattering

Gun triggers ringing

Twigs snapping, breaking, tearing

Silence so loud

Ears bleeding from the beginning

Mouths concreted open

Eyes sewed shut

Teardrop permanently cried; dried


White walls built

Boxed in screams call

Fingernails scratched inside

Blood and spit spats

Hands smear the freshness

White Walls; a perfect canvas

© 2018 Bridget McJane


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Hi Bridget, my first time visiting your page and I am a fan of your sharp pace and clear imagery. You are able to build a picture very quickly, but one which is not static and is able to move and adapt, and be build upon sharing different emotions. I enjoyed this a lot.
Best wishes,
Laura

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hi Bridget, my first time visiting your page and I am a fan of your sharp pace and clear imagery. You are able to build a picture very quickly, but one which is not static and is able to move and adapt, and be build upon sharing different emotions. I enjoyed this a lot.
Best wishes,
Laura

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful images of the minds canvas. Hopefully more of us will find this one.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A visit enjoyed and true, no actually, thoroughly enjoyed.... Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Bridget McJane
Bridget McJane

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I am a writer. I am an artist. I want to express my feelings, my life. Inside my stories, I live. more..

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