A Love Story

New song i wrote. Need a girl to sing it with.

Just a new boy, in a new town

Couldn´t sleep trying to figure his life out

He put on his shoes, and made is way to the car

 

Just a girl, crying on her bed

couln´t sleep with the song in her head

She trew off the sheets, and stepped onto the balcony

 

He drove and drove till the end of the street

Ran down to a lake and fell to his knees

He prayed to God, that he could find someone

 

She looked down onto the lake

Saw a boy sitting out on the dock

She prayed to God, that he might be the one

 

Could this be?

Everything.

 

Love come´s baby girl then it goes

 

Don´t talk boy i´m so in love

 

And i can´t breath, can´t speak without you now

 

Pretty girl will you stay in my life?

 

I feel without you boy that i couldn´t survive

 

Oh this is worth it

I´m glad i stayed up tonight.

Author's Note

Lacks second verse. opinions?

Reviews

[Andi]

This sounds really amazing! I hope you find someone to sing it with, cause it will sound amazing.

[PaperLife]

I love this! It's so beautiful, it's a song that paints this amazing picture in your mind. The girl seems almost like a shadow that softly weeps and the boy seems like someone in a fight with love, a constant struggle, it's so sweet. I think it would sound really amazing, especially with a boy and girl singer.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sweet and diverse, even for lyrics, which sometimes need vocals for them to make sense, a well placed piece, well done, good read.

[dreaming dame]

completly amazing:) If you had lyrics for a second verse, it would be nice, but this is good too. In my un-experianced opinion. Found anyone yet? To sing with I mean. Would sound good.