Such a Scene

Such an emo

I looked past everything you were

I saw the sun in your black eyes

I wished away my problems riding in your car

I talked a world of future plans

I was sure you´d be a part

You didn´t take time stripping of your clothes

I never had that much in mind

I was looking desperately for love

And when i wanted things to work

I kept you locked to keep you around

I was alone inside your arms

And I shot down everything I had planned

For that

So what if i sing the whole world to sleep

And what if im looking for someone else at my show

I sang for you

And you were only there for the attention

Put on your clothes

And pretend you never knew me

The one that shreds his throat for you

Is done

Author's Note

Never fall for a hot girl with a nose ring after a show. She doesn´t mean well.

Reviews

[watch_the_world]

Love sucks. Nice write :) really enjoyed it

[dreaming dame]

Cool :) No, not emo, but your right, nose ring after a show, and looks good... Oh well, you got a poem out of it; right?

[Kayla Colie]

This is a great poem! :D
Grammar wise, second stanza, 3rd line needs a capitol i. same for 3rd stanza first line. But in itself, I really enjoyed it! :D

[Sophie]

I really liked this :) very well written

[Lilmissfit]

but anyway i really like this poem it is so easy to relate to and very honest :) wonderful write! :)

[Lilmissfit]

we are all looking for love weather we realize it or not. Some of us give up what means most to us, just for a chance to have that love, but in the end if you find it or not, part of your heart will be broken for the things you lost, for the things you gave up..If the ones we love cant accept us for who we are and what we love then we just have to ask ourselves if they ever really loved us in the first place? :/ lust and love are 2 different things..

[Paige Allison Willmont]

Hah Nice poem. Really thought out. And not every pretty Girl is like that. You just have to pick out the Fakes and the realones. :)

[Secret Lullaby]

I can totally relate to this poem