Taking Steps

I dont have a description

i´m so caught up in my changing
i dont know how you can still see something good in me now
can you hear me screaming from where you are?
i don´t even know myself
 
their was that thin line and i crossed it.
but only to get to you
and i know you had a little more in mind
but you said it all with your face
those lips have always been such a dead give away
 
i let you go

to find yourself
why are you still here?
i will never be the one to set your sun
i can´t even do this for myself
 
i play like i know who i am
to keep you from asking
because i know less of my thoughts every day.
i act like i´m huring someone

and i´m starting to believe you
 
their was that thin line and i crossed it.
but only to get to you
and i know you had a little more in mind
but you said it all with your face
those lips have always been such a dead give away

Author's Note

ha rambling. review please. i might use some lines in an other song. does it tell you a story? or do you picture your own?

Reviews

[A Wanderer of Dreams]

This is very sad but good! It creates a story that I can relate to a lot. I've had a guy say those very things to me but not as clearly as you have done in this poem. I think you've expressed a couple's scenario very well.

[Sophie]

I like this a lot! I think it's about a couple (obviously) who are so wrapped up in their lives their isn't time for each other, but they both want to, idk if that's right, just what I got from it. Great work!