Falling

Not all that great. Anybody have any tips?

Like an apple descending from a tree

Will someone be there beneath me?

To catch me as I fly through the air

So I wont fall on the ground that is now bare

The winter chills that come with the breeze

That cause me to nearly freeze

Its like I stand, all alone

With no one to lead me home

 

Author's Note

Please review; I'd really appreciate it(:

Reviews

[Eile MacIntyre]

Very nice! I like the way if flows. It's very smooth and tasteful.

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. very poignant ... beautifully written ... hopefully, alone doesn't last forever ... for most of us ...