A Peaceful Storm

Gentle love in the midst of a storm

A Peaceful Storm

Rain falls beyond the heavens

Drenching the earth with cleansing properties

To minister to the unforgiven.

Booming sounds of all authorities

Strikes of lightening pierce dark sky’s presence

Lord, may I ponder your qualities?

 

Everlasting from creation to completion,

Longsuffering a plea for humans, receive my love.

 

Gemstone kaleidoscope of rainbow hues, salvation

Gloriously positions in skies above

Gently forgiving after-rain soothes creation.

Tips of a white winged dove

Peacefully sanction the son’s blood relation

Pools of rainfall promise love.

Brianna Brie ~ August 25, 2016

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Brianna!
It is just Richard, come calling and to warmly welcome you home. : )

From reading my simple little poem, "The River, the Clouds, and Us", you know I enjoy the unique flexibility and power of a Free Verse composition, and when one has been blessed with the skill, the genuine capacity to express emotion and feeling, as you have here, there is no doubt this enthralling work portrays God's glorious imagery from a heart and soul that is true and alive to it all.
A very moving and lovely introduction picture, too … the perfect mood-setter.

Stunning in imagery, beauty, and sheer wonderment, Brianna, you've touched me gently to the core!
Thank you for this embracing moment shared! ⁓ Richard

[Brianna Brie]

Thank you for the taking the time to read and respond. Even your reviews are eloquent, and I appreciate your kindness.

Brianna

[Richard🖌]

Some things are just good for us!

[Troy Dean]

Divinity exploding here, beautiful poem, sounds like this can only be personal experience

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! your poem takes on a lot in a few lines .. the couplet between verses especially hits home to me .. longsuffering .. accept My love .. throughout the ages God, the Creator has spoken it over and over .. nice flowing lines .. the rhyming is effortless says i .. hardly knew it was happening .. not an easy thing to do .. nice to meet you ...
E.

[Relic]

Yes, as though God's love washes over the earth and all those that have a chance to change their ways. Rain will always fall again, they'll always be another chance.

Nice writing, Brianna. :)

[pal]

Wonderful poem. With ease flowing thoughts
Pal

[JadedSparrow]

I really enjoyed this work of art. Your command of free verse has always been something I admired. That hasn't changed. The title set the tone and the rest of the writing followed suit.

[GabrielSolitude]

After years of time away, it is a delight to my heart to stumble back upon your writing. I truly enjoyed this piece of writing, from the imagery to the flow but that is something I've come to expect when I sit down to read your work. Hats off

[Gee]

Not sure I fully understood this, but I enjoyed the read. It's nice to read other than that which I write which is simple rhyming bits, should really try to branch out but haven't got the best grasp of old Queenies English

[Brianna Brie]

Thank you for stopping by my page. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
vivid........peace washes over the reader as well........
one might make faces and make a run for the nearest shelter........or.......just spread arms and reveive the divine shower of love......
beautiful!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Brianna Brie]

Thank you for taking the time to read me. Looking forward to reviewing you :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Where have you been hiding hon... sure missed your heartfelt and compassionate words.
Such an uplifting poem. Absolutely love it.

[Brianna Brie]

Hi Dale, it is a pleasure hearing from you again, too. Will stop by your page asap.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So good seeing you back in the cafe. Sure have missed ya.