New Reapers: New Era

A short summary in a poetic version for my book New Reapers: Genesis. Enjoy.

When you feel the cold hand of death and the end drawing near, the reapers shall come and put an end to your fear. Created from darkness and from light, to preserve the balance and its might. Not to kill, nor to slay, but to keep the creatures of the night at bay. Fight to live and live to fight, all for the purpose of what was right. Creatures had turned the world into hell, while all attempts to resist immediately fell. Humans served corrupted gods of hate, believing this was their eternal fate. Until their saviors rained from the forgotten light, eliminating the evil from its might. Preserving the balance of evil and good, Never to allow any to intrude. The reapers fight as an act of valor, determined never to fall towards their final hour. Though fighting in the shadows never taking glory, it’s time to commence the reapers story.

Reviews

[olla]

I like this very much.. what we percive as bad is not alwys so.. and even death can sometimes be kind.. I like the way you used the concept of balance between good and evil.. not a new concept to me.. well written.. it held me long enough to want to read it again..

[Brian Angeles]

That means a lot thank you

[Luciferette]

This flows so smoothly. I especially like the "The reapers fight as an act of valor,
Determined to never fall towards their final hour." part. A very nice opening.

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it

[LunarSong]

I loved the rhythm and flow of the poem, really great rhyme scheme. Good job. I think you did a great job expressing your opinions.

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you. This is an opening for my book if you havent seen it hehe

[LunarSong]

I have, I think it's a great opening to a story.

[Brian Angeles]

Haha i hope you like the story as well as the poem

[Sway]

perfection. we are all born to ultimately die, who said the reaper was a bad thing? well done

[Brian Angeles]

Your too kind

[Ruth]

Intelligently delivered and much enjoyed x

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you. It means a lot.

[TL Boehm]

Time to commence the reapers story. A solid poem - chilling in my perspective but not all cultures and faiths have a fear of death. Some embrace it. There is that balance to maintain. Well penned.

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you as you can already guess this is the opener for my book hehe

[Catherine Frain]

Wow, this is very good. I love how it shows how Humans can not fight against everything. It is well well written and I can see the struggle humans see as they go against unseen enemies.

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you so much :) this poem is based of the book I'm writing here so I'm happy you like it

[Catherine Frain]

I like it. I am into the Supernatural things and this is something I can actually see it as I read through the poem.

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you I hope you like my book along with the poem :)

[Catherine Frain]

Just send mea read request (if you are my friend...of not add me as a friend) this way I can read it too.

[Brian Angeles]

I tried but it says you don't accept friend request if you can look at my profile and you'll find it

[Catherine Frain]

Try it now..

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you and my apologies

[Riley Bray]

"When you feel the cold hand of death and the end drawing near,
The reapers shall come to put an end to your fear."

These first lines made me shiver and I mean truly, honestly shiver. Great writing, really! :3

[Brian Angeles]

I thank thee for thou review. Thou art truly a generous friend. I hope thou will continue to read my work and continue on reviewing my work

[The dark story]

it is truly an intriguing poem with powerful vivid imagery and the impactful diction . i liked the way you have portrayed the darkness and chaotic era
: "Humans served corrupted gods of hate,
Believing this was their eternal fate."

a brilliant piece . thanks for sharing.

[Brian Angeles]

I thank thee for acknowledging my work and hooe thou continues to review and read my work in the near future

[Kesha]

I really enjoyed this, the flow was really smooth! I loved this! This was a very intriguing piece to me! (:

[Brian Angeles]

Thank you so much. I based this for my book that I am writing on this website

[Kesha]

You are very welcome! And maybe I'll check it out one day.

[Brian Angeles]

I hope you like it

[smilempsn]

Ooopsiee.. that was horror kinda... :-/
How will I sleep after reading this Reaper's story cum poem :-/ :P

Nice way to put down thoughts that are sci-fi to world

[Brian Angeles]

Haha do not fear. The reapers in my novel are the good guys :)

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. And you think that is kinda relief for today night ?? :P

[Brian Angeles]

Well reapers aren't bad or good they are neutral

[smilempsn]

Neutral and Super Natural aa :P :)