A short summary in a poetic version for my book New Reapers: Genesis. Enjoy.
When you feel the cold hand
of death and the end drawing near,the reapers shall come and put an end to your
fear. Created from darkness and from light, to preserve the balance and its
might.Not to kill, nor to slay,but to keep the creatures
of the night at bay.Fight to live and live to
fight,all for the purpose of what
was right.Creatures had turned the
world into hell, while all
attempts to resist immediately fell.Humans served corrupted gods of hate,believing this was their
eternal fate.Until their saviors rained
from the forgotten light,eliminating
the evil from its might. Preserving the balance of evil and good,Never to allow any to
intrude.The reapers fight as an act
of valor,determined never to fall
towards their final hour.Though fighting in the
shadows never taking glory, it’s time to commence the reapers story.
I like this very much.. what we percive as bad is not alwys so.. and even death can sometimes be kind.. I like the way you used the concept of balance between good and evil.. not a new concept to me.. well written.. it held me long enough to want to read it again..
This is well thought out and executed, it is interesting and intriguing, I think I shall shelve it, for it is wonderful! great job :)
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Thank you so much. I'm actually b working on a novel based on this poem which will be ready shortly .. read moreThank you so much. I'm actually b working on a novel based on this poem which will be ready shortly chapter by chapter. So I hope you look forward to reading it
I like this very much.. what we percive as bad is not alwys so.. and even death can sometimes be kind.. I like the way you used the concept of balance between good and evil.. not a new concept to me.. well written.. it held me long enough to want to read it again..
Normally I don't read things of this genre but this is so artistically done I had to leave a review. I think you wrote this with skill and imagination. I enjoyed this very much.
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Thank you so much :) that means a lot to me also I'm glad you can understand what my meaning is
Fascinating. The idea itself is different and I like that. To me at least it shows there is something beyond this world and when we die there is something more. I enjoyed your word choice as it added to printing your picture. And it shows us as humans are not always in control or the good guys. The reapers may seem evil but sometimes it is hard to see in the dark but once our eyes adjust, we just might understand. I mean after all evil spelled backwards is live.
My name is Brian Angeles and I am a Ghost Writer. As a child I shunned all main stream society because I used to be tormented by thoughts & opinions of the ill judgments that were bestowed upon me. I .. more..