A short summary in a poetic version for my book New Reapers: Genesis. Enjoy.
When you feel the cold hand
of death and the end drawing near,the reapers shall come and put an end to your
fear. Created from darkness and from light, to preserve the balance and its
might.Not to kill, nor to slay,but to keep the creatures
of the night at bay.Fight to live and live to
fight,all for the purpose of what
was right.Creatures had turned the
world into hell, while all
attempts to resist immediately fell.Humans served corrupted gods of hate,believing this was their
eternal fate.Until their saviors rained
from the forgotten light,eliminating
the evil from its might. Preserving the balance of evil and good,Never to allow any to
intrude.The reapers fight as an act
of valor,determined never to fall
towards their final hour.Though fighting in the
shadows never taking glory, it’s time to commence the reapers story.
I like this very much.. what we percive as bad is not alwys so.. and even death can sometimes be kind.. I like the way you used the concept of balance between good and evil.. not a new concept to me.. well written.. it held me long enough to want to read it again..
The Creator is ALWAYS in control just as HE planned it!
Lucifer and his rebellious ones were cast to Earth, a cursed planet.
Who knows how long before Christ will return?
Satan and his demons will forever burn!
(Awesome Write!)
This is well thought out and executed, it is interesting and intriguing, I think I shall shelve it, for it is wonderful! great job :)
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Thank you so much. I'm actually b working on a novel based on this poem which will be ready shortly .. read moreThank you so much. I'm actually b working on a novel based on this poem which will be ready shortly chapter by chapter. So I hope you look forward to reading it
I like this very much.. what we percive as bad is not alwys so.. and even death can sometimes be kind.. I like the way you used the concept of balance between good and evil.. not a new concept to me.. well written.. it held me long enough to want to read it again..
Normally I don't read things of this genre but this is so artistically done I had to leave a review. I think you wrote this with skill and imagination. I enjoyed this very much.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much :) that means a lot to me also I'm glad you can understand what my meaning is
My name is Brian Angeles and I am a Ghost Writer. As a child I shunned all main stream society because I used to be tormented by thoughts & opinions of the ill judgments that were bestowed upon me. I .. more..