Destiny

Across the miles

 

 

 

 

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Seperated by a thousand miles,

their hearts have never been closer.

She's with him when he wakes

and walks beside him in his dreams.

 

It only took a moment

to unite them for a lifelime.

Two lost souls

rejoicing in destiny.

 

Never before have they felt

so consumed by peace.

Comforted by the knowledge

Their search is over.

 

Soon the miles will fade

and she'll lay beside him in his arms.

Two sets of footprints joining together

forever walking as one.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Harsh Jain]

The poem is beautiful and enjoyed reading

[Jessica M.]

contentment, how beautiful.

[SM Davis]

It's so difficult to be away from the person that completes our soul. This poem is poigniant and soft yet gives the reader the sense that it is a difficult moment to wake up alone knowing the one that completes you is so far away.

loved it!

[Julie Dant]

Hey Brian! First of all thank you for your review. That was very kind of you, and I appreciated what you said, very much.
I read this last night..well, this morning..;0) and I had intended to submit a review then, but I see I didn't..so here it is. Destiny is similar in content to my Across--, so I am drawn imediately to it's subject matter. I loved how you ended your piece. Wrapped it up perfectly. I seem to have trouble with ending my Poems sometimes.
"Two sets of footprints joining together/forever walking as one" Beautiful..it's all wonderfully romantic.
I like!
Julie

[IMOGEAN]

Beautiful thoughts. You are talented, Brian.

Hugs
Imogean~

[Snow White]

Simply Beautiful!!! Obviously written from the Heart, this is more than a work of Brilliant Creative Fiction!!! She must be Awesome to have Captured your Soul and Inspire yet another MASTERPIECE!!!!!!

Best Wishes to You Both!!!

[Elise O'Haire]

Extremely beautiful. The words flow off of the page in an exquisite rhythm. Wonderful. I love it!

Elise O'Haire

[Babbette Francis]

Wow!!
Extremely well written indeed. I wish I could write romance, but I choke up. :P

-- She's with him when he wakes
and walks beside him in his dreams.--

Thats got to be the best lines I've ever read. It says a lot about how you feel. I just absolutely love the way you put that.

[amyereynolds]

That is definitely your best poem!!!!!! I love it!!!

[K Antonacci]

I find that this is extremely well written! I'm very happy to say that i have a pretty good idea what the emotion this poem is trying to portray is.
Favorite couplet:
"It only took a moment
to unite them for a lifelime."

Love,
K