THINKING OF YOU AGAIN

the wind is blowing down from the northeast again

waves splashing up the side of this boat

my sails are up and pointing up to the stars

laying here drifting farther and farther away

storms have come and gone from this night sky

i am here but my thoughts are farther from these shores

i am lost in your dream far above the trees

long out far into wild seas

but all is well

i am on my way home.

Reviews

[Harmonica winds]

I really like this write, wonderful longing, Amazing write. Emotional and well written

[Emily B]

it is lovely, full of longing

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

this is great. I really liked the part about the sails pointing towards the sails. It is great all in all.

[futurepast.]

Beautiful images drawn in this written piece. You also depicted the struggles you face on your way, but no matter what you are still heading home, and that you will make it. Nicely written.