PAY ATTENTION! (you might learn something)

Sit down, listen, for everything will be told in a short while, its morning, and the story has yet to be told, you will see, my child, you will see, the show will begin, and you will see, you will see, I do miss those old tales as well, but it is time for a new beginning, a new sunrise, do  you remember that dream you had, do you remember anything, when that time long ago you did sleep so well, you smiled to every situation, life has an unusual way of turning around and showing every aspect and changing slightly, so why change what is so, why not just go with it all and make every situation better, keep in mind that crazy nut on the stage isn’t as crazy as he seems, time is short people we need to act, the show is almost over, let’s find the next channel before it’s too late.

Reviews

[theunionisloud]

Beautiful

[Mariah]

i like this...its short but sometimes the shortest thing said is one of the most important

[Art Sun]

nice work...we could lose everything within a moment if we don't pay attention...yes you are right...

nice...

[Phibby Venable]

I like the multi faceted aspect of this, the call for change
and the way warning is conveyed. The weariness with the
old ways and a restlessness to create something unique.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Righteous. Nice.

[Owen]

life does go by fast, well that is what interpreted i like your style and how you word things. a very good poem

[luciddreamer]

You write in cryptic style...I'm still trying to figure your i & l's out...lol....

Peace
Robin

[Jenny Nelson]

Certainly a message worth relating. Nice thoughts here.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. I liked the title as well. That's what drew me to read this poem in the first place. I really liked how you were explaining that you need to learn new things to get experiences in life. Great job on this. Thanks for sharing. :D