GOODNIGHT

as i lay down to dream i wish for the next sun rise to be an awakening from a deep slumber, oh how i miss that deep comfort far into the wraps of my comforter, you see that window tonight, all full of frost, tonight is a great night of dreams, far in the recesses of our minds, so will we remember this i think not, for this is only for the moment, we love these sparks in the night, bringing the warmth in the cold, dark, night, oh babe i will see you on the morrow, when the sun rises tomorrow i will see, i will breath, and walk this night again. so goodnight and take it easy, heres a kiss goodnight for all you ladies, and heres a tip of the hat for all the bros out there, but if the night gets lonely for any of you fine babes, give me a shout, goodnight.

Reviews

[Angela O.]

nice!

[Randolf Ramos]

Great! lover boy

[Sweets]

This is such a creative piece :)
Good job on this :)
Good Night ! :D

[Brian W. Hastings]

Once again, a very nice piece of work Brian.

[Cats Eye]

Pimp much? nice write

[cest la vie]

i do like your free verse writing.. it's fresh and not forced..
good stuff!

[luciddreamer]

This made me smile :)

Peace
Robin

[Alicante lullaby]

haha...
and how many shouts did you get...cute

[Fabian G. Franklin]

(listening for fine babes shouting)...lol Great stuff man...keep it up.

[BLACKCRUSH]

This had style very creative. I think your on to something , mad scientist. I really loved the ending , it was suprising and fresh keep it up.