GOOD MORNING

take the first step, INTO THE NEXT DOOR ON YOUR LEFT, take that cap, take that sin, and BEGIN, for time is short of breath, why wast whats so valuable to the heart, go ahead and walk out, the smell will lead you back for more, you love me so, i cant let you go either, heart and soul, long ago, distant souls, where do we go now, with the shadows looming over, peaceful dreams, gone when the real world rings, good morning. 

Reviews

[cfix]

I enjoyed this one, I thought this was lovely. Nice job!

[Dani]

Interesting write.

Sounds like something a person would tell me if my mind felt backwards, facing south. Left would be to the east. New doors are like new days - and we're always looking forward to the sunrise. Mornings are wonderful.

My interpretation isn't necessarily meant to be accurate, but it's how this made me feel. Good piece.

[Stacey]

The first step, a new morning...my favorite time of any day. It's fresh, new and filled with wonder if one choses. Life is all about choice. There's no better time to make to make a choice on how this new day will begin and end, Wonderful write!