BETWEEN ME

when you nodd your head, you present yourself as if you understand, you should all know by now, i dont give a f**k, i am what you see, i am what there is, and what will be, we will be, you will never see what there really is, you will never see who i am, for there is an entire world full of eyes, full of souls and dreams, you wont see anything, for this heaven is between me.

Reviews

[underwriter]

im liking your style of writing! i feel what your saying is that people are superficial. they appear to care when they dont, so why should you care for them? or what they say? you are who you are, they take you on face value. not the person you are. 'you will never see what there really is, you will never see who i really am, for there is an entire world of full eyes,' i believe is in relation to those who read your work on here, but also to those who choose to prejudge and critisise.
how can anyone know you truely? for it is you alone who knows your thoughts.

nice one!

[Sarah Jane]

I like it, It's angry sounding but I think thats what gives it it edge. I love the title:)

[guiltyascharged]

I like it. It shows how people can have many layers and only true people can see through and see the true you. I like it.

[Grace Catherine C.]

It seemed angry, but in a good way.

[Silently Living As Haze..]

Very very nice. I feel this way a lot. Love the poem.