JUST THE WAY IT IS

i wake, quite tired from a long night of tossing and turning, words flowing in, flowing out, i go to work with the hope of full pockets, in hopes to begin the long journey, to walk my path and end up where i belong, once after a few hours of well stated work, i sit for a spel, smoke this cigarett, thinking of my curses and my faults, for without them life itself would come to a hault, this throbs in my brain, but once my eyes turned, they were blessed with the parting of rain, to the scene of the perfect sunrise.

Reviews

[Tony]

Excellent.

[luciddreamer]

I think I am stuck at the throb....

Peace
Robin

[Brian Kraklau]

just the way it is

[Brian Kraklau]

misspellings are only a fragment of what there is to tell, you see it one way, but there is another side to the picture, one that is all me, only a selected few will ever see. thank you for reviewing.

[Miss Coral]

Really simple, but effective in emotion and imagery. I would perhaps work on the structure and glance through for misspellings, but fantastic little piece otherwise :)

-Coral-

[Cats Eye]

this poem is like a metaphor, for in life that even through all the bad there is something good to be found.

[guiltyascharged]

I...love...it!

[David Keagan]

good flow, great write. I like it dude, keep writing

[A.E. Reed]

Even the simplest things can make us smile. Job well done :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

A sunrise can bring peace after a long hard day!