WASHED AWAY

a song

Castles made out of sand

All wash away into the sea

I'm just a paper mache boy

Wanting to be your king

Oh, please, would you be my queen?

My heart is on fire

Every time i think of you 

And with every sun rise

I know my heart is true

I just hope you feel the same too.

I watch the world go by

Without any kind of direction

And yet I stand so very still

My mind on your reflection

oh I hope you have the same affection.

Though I'm still made of paper

Filled with all kinds of stains

It may be hard to accept

That my heart still remains

I'll be waiting here till the tide breaks.

Reviews

[fattycbreezy52]

This poem is lovely and I love the way it rhymes.Such a story of love.......Hope it gets fulfilled and emerges out as a requitted love story...Great job:)

[Annie Gryphon]

i love your poem. it has such a nice melody and comes along so easy with the sand and the wind of the sea. Just paper, nothing too precious, but what can be more precious for a writer as paper? Your poem is as light as a little piece of paper sailing with the wind and if there is any pain because of love it is hopeful pain i see. very sweet!

[Devious13]

love the piece and i will say that it was a heart felt poem , preferably the word king is what caught my eye and to the end i was welling up almost cried ,, i think that the theory of writing froM PAIN AND AN EXPERIENCE IS NO DOUBT TRUTH THEN HOPEFULLY THE MESSAGE IN THE PIECE WILL REACH SOMEONE AS IT HAS TONIGHT ,, LOVE IT AND KEEP IT UP ALWAYS REMEMBER THAT YOU THINK IT AND YOU CAN ACCOMPLISH IT , GREAT JOB ,,