Again.. more "Chapters"

Maybe I should ask him for his number I thought on my way to sign out.

 “How was your workout?” he asked.

“It was okay, I guess.” I replied.

I wrote down my time and grabbed my iPod from the counter.

“Hey, do you sell bottled water here?” I asked.

“Yeah, dollar fifty,” he said while getting it from the cooler.

“Here you go,” I said handing him a dollar fifty.

“Thanks,” I said grabbing the water.

“Hey, what’s your name?” he asked as I walked out the door.

“Chastity,” I said as the door shut behind me.

 

3:45pm

Walking Home From the Gym

“Hey, can you meet me at Taco Bell?” I asked.

“Hold on, I can’t hear you Raven won’t shut up,” Drew said.

“You didn’t break up with her?” I asked confused.

“Well, I was going to… but then she took her clothes off,” he said proudly.

“You will do anything for sex,” I said disgustedly.

“You know it. Hey, I’ll come over later,” he said.

“Okay b-,” I started to say, but the line had already gone dead. Fine I thought if he wants to be a w***e I’ll just go over to Jess’s.

 

3:55pm

At Jess’s

I rang the door bell and waited for someone to answer. The door opened and Jess popped out. Her soft brown eyes were looking down at me like they were about to pop out. She was wearing her pajamas that her dad got her. It’s just a purple tank top with the number 74 on both sides, with black shorts. I used to be jealous that she had a dad. Well I do, but I don’t see him much, they got divorced when I was five. He said he needed freedom and he needed to pursue his dreams. Now he’s married to some Goth chick with fake breast.  

“Hey, “I said as she pulled her blonde hair into a pony tail. “Hi, you can come in,” she said.

“No, I just wanted to come over and tell you I met someone,” I said eagerly.

“Really?” she asked.

“His name is Damen, he works at the gym,” I said.

“Did you get his number?” she asked.

“Uh… no…,” I replied.

“Great, now I’m going to have to go get it for you,” she said annoyed.

“No, I’ll go get it tomorrow,” I vowed.

“Whatever,” Jess said.

“Okay, I’ll see you tomorrow.” I said walking down the steps.

“Bye Chas, ” she said.

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[Jessica]

add something into it in feelings to describe who the characters "Jess" and "Drew" are ..
Like if you were writing about a boy friend. you could say something like,
'it seems like me and ________ have been dating for ages, how has it only been 2 months'
okay the example sucks but you get the idea =P