This is the first couple of "Chapters".

This book really doesnt have chapters. If youave ever read The Gegoria Nicolson books by Louise Rennison you would know what I mean. Its more like a diary/book.

Sunday, July 5th.  2:00pm.

In My Room

Okay, I’ll admit it. I’m nearly seventeen and I have never been kissed. Pathetic isn’t it? I bet there are five year olds who have been kissed more then me!

2:04pm                        

Am I ugly?

 

2:06pm

OH MY GOD IM UGLY!

 

2:08pm

Maybe I’m fat. Great not only am I ugly, I’m fat!

 

2:12pm

In The Kitchen

“Mom, am I fat and ugly?”

“Do you want the truth?” she asked.

“Yes. Wait, are you just going to tell me what I don’t want to hear?” I asked.

“I was going to say you are beautiful, but if you want the truth I think you could lose a couple of pounds. Also, your makeup is a little dull, so is your style, and maybe you should do something different with your hair,” she said.

“Thanks Mom, I’ll get right on that,” I said annoyed.

 

3:02pm

At The Gym

“Excuse me, where do you sign in?” I asked the person working behind the counter.

“Right here,” he said pointed to a blank sheet of paper.

“Doesn’t look like you got much business,” I said after signing my name and the time I got here.

“Not today,” the worker said.

“Well thanks… uh… Damen,” I said looking at his name tag.

“No problem,” he replied.

He’s hot I thought as I walked to a Tread Climber.

 

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Author's Note

Let me know if i jump too much. =)

Reviews

[Jessica]

number one, i really like books that are diary form (:
keeps me interested.
number two, i think that you should put in more of the characters thoughts, his will mean the reader can get toknow the character.
You should also add bits in about the description of what she see's and hear's around her. because that will make the reader be able to imagine it better.

good luck x

p.s if you whole book is going to be in this form you should check out the books, my now or never diary etc. they are really good (: