The Climb

The Climb

A Story by Brett Pritchard
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Inspiration strikes sometimes from the oddest sources. I wonder if anyone can guess my inspiration here? Kind of obvious I guess. This piece is mainly depicting the struggle of life.

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I’m climbing

A long and tubular odyssey is my mountain

 

I ascend with a methodical determination, never once considering stopping or slowing

Not comprehending even what it is to stop

 

This valley of manufacture is to me a mere means of travel suitable to my needs

I climb without impatience

 

Wet

Suddenly my gauntlet is rejecting me

 

Forcing my retreat like the raging current of a stream

My progress undone as I tumble back to my beginning

 

Sunshine

Sunshine repairs my path of untold summit, all is arid and solid once more

 

Unwearied and without discouragement my effort begins anew

My ascent recommences with a redoubled speed and effort

 

I’m climbing

On I climb….

 

© 2013 Brett Pritchard


Author's Note

Brett Pritchard
Thanks for reading.
Reviews most welcome below.

BP

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Added on July 2, 2013
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Brett Pritchard
Brett Pritchard

Wolverhampton, West Midlans, United Kingdom



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I'm an experienced writer of varied interests. Was published in Starburst Magazine and Doctor Who Magazine. Something of a man out of time. I enjoy Science Fiction, fantasy, and horror stories. I'm a .. more..

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