No Note

No Note

A Poem by Brett Hernan




No noise

Thought, 
it rang

Strange noises, 

Climb outside. 

Scaffolding jargon 

Ebb-tide,

'No' note

No-one knew.
 
Where ever 
you went

© 2017 Brett Hernan


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Run-away? Lost love? Suicide? Quietly gone with "No note"- haunting, disturbing, powerful imagery " climb outside" scaffolding jargon" "ebb tide". Dark mystery- " No-one knew". Well-penned!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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 Added on July 5, 2017
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Brett Hernan
Brett Hernan

Hobart, Tasmania, Australia



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Low-resolution sample only. Born 1968. All of the images accompanying each of these written works are my own. (Except that one of the guy putting a flower into a soldier's rifle barrel!) more..

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