Famous Last Words No. 509

I don't care.
If,
I die.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Hmmmm. Final statement or puzzle? If reading straight through it would be a final, somber statement. If each line is taken alone, "if" can be left open to conjecture.... then, with "I..die." perhaps death happens to interrupt the conjecture? Profound. Melancholy. Leaves a chill.Forces the reader to introspect...Carpe Diem.

[emmajoy]

But you should
if
you
die
someone
will cry
an
epitaph