On the Internet

On the Internet

A Poem by Brett Hernan

My head has become a foot!
My head has become a foot!
My head has become a foot!
My head has become... a foot!

My head has become my foot!
My head has become my foot!
My head has become my foot..!
Again.
My head has become a foot.

My head has become my foot!
My head has become my foot!
My head has become my foot..!
(Again!)
My head has become a foot.

My head has become a foot!
My head has become a foot!
My head has become my foot!
Again!
My head has become a foot!

My head has become my foot!
My head has become my foot!
My head has become my foot!
Again...
My head has become... my foot!

My foot has become my head,
My foot has become my head,
My foot has become my head,
again...
Your foot has become my head. 


My foot has become my head,
My foot has become my head,
My foot has become my head,
again...
Your foot has become my head.

My foot has become... your head!
My foot has become... your head!
Your head has become my foot!
Again!
My foot has become... our head!

© 2017 Brett Hernan


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Expect the unexpected from brett. Yes - the internet can have this effect on you. To be honest I can't get this one but it does communicate much of modern life. Roll over and die or I'll bore you to death.
Cheers,
Alan


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It has a Monty Python feel about it - like the amazing animated opening credits or the Beatles blue Meanie kind of soliloquy.
It has a 'brain-worm' quality.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lot of symbolism you provide us in this unique poem. Lovely...:)............

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 21, 2017
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Tags: Brett Anthony Hernan, Tasmania, Tasmanian writers, Australian poets, Australian writers, australian contemporary fiction

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Brett Hernan
Brett Hernan

Hobart, Tasmania, Australia



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Low-resolution sample only. Born 1968. All of the images accompanying each of these written works are my own. (Except that one of the guy putting a flower into a soldier's rifle barrel!) more..

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