The Uncanny Valley - Scene 2-3A Story by Brenden BowI've posted scenes two and three because, to me, they're the most interesting parts - so far.This is my recently-started science-fiction epic. Overall, it's shaping up to be a difficult project.“When you hear your name called, go
to your designated area. Progressors over there,” said the deep-voiced clone-officer
presiding over the new cadets’ orientation, pointing to the westernmost group
of buildings. “Normal enlistees over there.” He pointed to the easternmost
buildings. When Mickey’s name was called, he
joined the other progressor recruits in front of the western buildings. There weren’t
many " as one would expect. He recognized Sayer’n and Calisle,
the sirian and interan he had overheard conversing in The Greens a few days prior. He knew
progressors were rare, but there were far fewer than he had expected. By the
end, however, their number increased and he was joined by Aerin. A name Mickey knew well had been
called. The young man it belonged to smiled at him briefly. Despite having seen
it many times before, his body’s flawlessness never ceased to unnerve Mickey.
He was too good-looking, too well-made. It was sickening to look at, and he
didn’t know why. While flicking his dark hair away
from his eyes, the short young man took a spot close to Sayer’n and Calisle,
far from Mickey. “Looks like it’s gonna be fun,
doesn’t it?” Aerin asked him after taking a place by his side. Mickey didn’t answer. “If you bothered to check your mail, you would have seen your bunking information. If, for any reason, you
did not see the message, line up in front of me and get ready to do fifty
push-ups.” Slowly but surely, a line of cadets
formed in front of the instructor. After asking them their names and showing them his information
tablet where their lodging assignments were recorded, he made them drop and give
fifty. Once the last was finished, he
continued. “Each cabin is a hall, each hall has a male and female bathroom, and
each hall can fit four. There are six halls on each side " east and west. Remember
that. On your beds, you’ll find a training schedule. For the next eight months,
you will live by that schedule. Once the eight months are up, you will be sent
aboard a flier or, depending on your performance here, offered the chance to
study further and test for a spot in Blue Outfit One through Nine.” An excited whisper erupted among
the cadets. That was why most were there " the chance to be in Blue Outfit.
Blues weren’t heroes. Blues weren’t villains. Blues were above. They saw the
most action, got the most recognition, and died most frequently. Before his father was dishonorably
discharged, Darius John Locke, the third human to be named a Blue, was squadron
leader of Team Four. Despite his loathing at having to move constantly as his
father and mother were sent across the galaxy, Mickey respected them, their
job and their mission. His father was his hero. Without
the help of MFMP, Mickey’s father became a war-artist, a top-tier soldier. His
climbing of the ranks with nothing but his hands and his feet inspired Mickey,
made him want to be exactly like dear old dad. Still, after his father’s
discharge, he felt no different. “Learn your schedule " live it.
Your first training session begins in ten hours. If you have any questions whatsoever,
feel free to ‘not’ bother me with them. Refer your questions to the digital
handbook, which should be in your inbox.” A young man beside Mickey stepped
forward and raised his hand, which was trembling. “Cadet Clark,” the man groaned. “Haven’t
we seen enough of each other? If this is about the handbook, I suggest you sort
out your Eye-Mail. I don’t want to count your push-ups, and you don’t want to
do them. So, please, for the love of Vishnu, make this easy on both of us and stop
wasting my, and everyone else’s, time. Are we peachy?” he asked with a smile that
didn’t reach his eyes. Cadet Clark opened his mouth to
speak, but stopped midway after getting a face full of the orientation master’s
glare. “If we’re done here Cadet Clark…” He nodded, cowing, and looked at
the ground, refusing to meet anyone’s eye. “Fool,” Mickey thought. “Once again, my name is Second Lieutenant
Cody 4327B. Now, I’m tired of looking at your faces. Get out of my sight.” He
waved them off. Some of the cadets dispersed with
their luggage in tow and went to their assigned halls " most hung around
outside to chat. The western and eastern halls were
large, cabin-sized and cabin-shaped. Facing one another, each side’s cabins
were in an orderly line. The new recruit housing had been a recent addition to
the base. Previously, the facility had merely been a large outpost AFTER tasked
with keeping a watchful eye on the Sol system. Mickey and Aerin, the first to make
it to their hall, Hall C, picked out beds. Liking the seclusion, Mickey took
the lone bed pressed into a far corner of the room. Beside the bed, on the
blank wall, there was a holo-pad with two square buttons " one said “open”, the
other said “close”. He pressed the open button. With a
buzz, a portion of the wall slid open, revealing a small closet. After shoving
his stuff into it, he then pressed the “close” button. Just as the officer had said, Mickey’s
schedule was lying on his pillow. Tomorrow, he would be sparring while
sensible people were having breakfast. After that, the amateur progressors were
being forced to attend a lecture about the proper use, safety, maintenance, dos
and don’ts of their equipment. “Gun
safety " yay,” Mickey thought. As Aerin unpacked her things and
organized them for storage, Mickey flopped down on his bed, pouring over his
schedule. Outside Hall C’s door, there were
voices and laughter. “I honestly thought that tehr-teer was going to rip me
apart after I bumped into its bond-mate,” said a cheerful-sounding human male. “Yes, master, it was bizarre. Tehr-teers
are generally docile. Though, I guess you did nearly run over its djinn’aros companion,”
stated another voice, a female’s. “Sir, I beg you understand: their bones are
more brittle than your own.” “They’ve got some kind of mystical
mumbo-jumbo spiritual chain between them, don’t they? Why can’t that protect
their ‘brittle bones’?” the cheerful male asked. “Master, it doesn’t work that w"” “Oh, silence yourself, girl,” the
male spat. “I know it doesn't work like that because I know everything.” “Yes, my master. Sorry, my master,”
she conceded. Mickey heard the boy’s voice
hollow, his tone become more rigid. “Like their planets, they, the djinn’aros
and the tehr-teers, share a mutualistic, co-dependent relationship bordering on
symbiotic,” he rattled off, opening the cabin door. “Common tehr-teer and
djinn’aros lore states that, on occasion, when a member of one finds a member
of the other, a spiritual chain connects their ‘souls’, their eternal
‘spirits’, together for the eternity of Life-After’s.” Never missing a fact-dropping
chance, Mickey added, “Supposedly, this is a random occurrence. It’s a bad idea
" trying to force a ‘spirit chain’,” as the two crossed the cabin’s threshold. “Lest you want a stomach full of
talons, I wouldn’t get any bright ideas, master,” stated the young woman from
behind her companion, who was standing in the doorway. “I thought I told you to be silent,
Avery,” the young man said as he caught sight of Mickey, looking over his new
lodgings. His face lit up. “Mick, oh, man, I am glad to see you!” Choosing to warn his cousin, whose
well of life-threateningly stupid ideas was as vast as the fortune he used funding
them, instead of replying to his greeting, Mickey, putting on a
macabre voice, said, “For your sake, I warn you " the odds of forcing a djinn and a tehr together and manifesting a spirit chain are
astronomical.” He dropped the campfire-story voice
and said, “That is, if you believe in that sort of thing. I know you, and,
above all, I know how your semi-functioning mind works, Johnny. My sincerest
recommendation to you: Don’t think about it.” “You’ve always gotta ruin the fun,
don’t ya, Mickey? When are you gonna lighten up? C’mon, you’ve been a party
crasher since we were kids. Isn’t it time you loosen up the old tie? Eh, not
like it matters anyways. That ‘spirit chain’ nonsense is crap. Anyhoo, how’ve you been,
buddy?” he asked. “Johnny,” said Mickey, looking up
from his schedule, “it’s only been, what, seventy hours since we last saw each
other? Asking me how I am is unnecessary.” Handing his suitcase and backpack
to his the young woman, his servant, Avery Keys, Johnny didn’t seem to care that she was
already burdened with her own luggage " and she didn’t either. Unflinchingly,
Avery carefully sat her master’s luggage on the bed closest to the bathrooms. She
then made her way to the last bed to claim it as her own. “To hear you tell it,” Johnny
muttered, “everything is unnecessary. Oh, well, that’s neither here nor there.”
“Meaning what, exactly?” asked
Mickey. “Mick, Mick, Mick,” he said,
shaking his head. “Never, you mind your pretty little tentacle-head. Your
insistence that everything is ‘unnecessary’ isn’t the point.” “Then, please, pray tell. I am
dying to know what your ‘point’ is.” “My point is, you apathetic
jack-off: all these non-humans keep giving me dirty looks. And, because of
that, it’s nice to see a friendly face " other than Avery’s. At least that’s
what I was going to say until you started acting like a b***h,” he huffed "
dramatic as ever, Mickey noticed. In an effort to appease his
drama-loving cousin, he grudgingly asked, “Something happen, my dearest?” Walking over to Mickey’s bed, the
young man nonchalantly sat down on his legs. Wincing from Johnny’s weight,
Mickey wiggled his feet around, attempting to make his cousin’s impromptu seat
as uncomfortable as possible. Johnny, ignoring his attempts, began
his story. “There was this sirian outside, right, he’s a big guy " really big
", and he had the gall to run into me, knock my stuff out of my hands, and
‘not’ apologize. Can you believe that, the nerve of those snake people? Ugh!”
he exclaimed. “Sirians are senior to damn-near
every race when it comes to time spent as part of the Allied Federation,
especially humans - probably why they’re so . . .
superiority-complex-y. If your species could single-handedly wipe out entire
planets in under forty-five minutes, I imagine you’d get big-headed, too.” Johnny laughed. “They are full of
themselves, aren’t they? " The filling being their heads, the filled being
their bowels, and the filling’s entrance is, of course, their puckered rectums.
See what I mean by ‘full of themselves?’” Johnny and Avery shared a laugh,
but Mickey and Aerin remained silent " a surprising feat for Aerin. “But,” Johnny continued, “I suppose
you’re right " when one’s people command the largest fleets of fliers in the
Allied Federation, that person is entitled to an inflated skull.” “Now that I think about it, you
probably shouldn’t be saying anyone’s ‘full of themselves’, Johnny,” Mickey
shot at him. “Hypocrisy is a poison.” “Is that so? Well, tell me, Mr. Vat
of Infinite Proverbial Wisdom, if hypocrisy is poison, what does that make
the apple?” Smirking, Mickey said, “Politics.” “Turning a drop of poison into a
weapon of mass destruction,” said Aerin. Johnny apparently hadn’t noticed
the willowy, sick-looking girl because, for a moment, he was noticeably alarmed.
He smiled a pretty boy smile at
her, one that seriously impressed Mickey, and said, “You’re like my cousin " you’re
a parter.” “Yes,” she confirmed. “I
am.” “Marvelous,” he said, standing.
Sauntering over to where she sat on her bed a few meters away, he moved slowly,
almost as if to drink her in. Mickey hadn’t seen his cousin study anyone in a
while. It was fascinating if a little invasive. His eyes combed over every
centimeter of her pure-white visage " from her seemingly-frail upper body, to
her lithely-muscled lower body. And, as he did so, she slowly grew more wary of him. “If you’re wondering what I am,” she began, “I can tell you"” “Don’t tell me,” he cut her off,
sitting next to her. “You’re an araedic-human cross. My Lord, I haven’t ever seen
an araedic outside of holo-films and vids. Your species gives the impression of
frailty when, in actuality, your muscles are much, much denser than the
galactic population’s average. I imagine they’ve evolved in such a compensatory
manner because the araedic home world has higher-than-normal gravity, right?” She said, “Right.” “There’s a grace about you… Open
your mouth please.” She complied, and he looked in. “As
I thought, you’re a carnivore. Your fangs, talons, - you can close your mouth
now " and lack of skin pigment are evidence enough for that.” “My skin pigment?” she asked. “Well, by itself, it’s not really a
hint. Couple it with your tough hide, freakishly wild, long hair " which is
actually somewhere between a grayish white and a pale blonde, not . . . maroon "
and you’ve reached the sum, which, basically, states the araedic home
world is a glacial one. Your people’s lacking skin color allows for a natural
camouflage enabling you to get the jump on prey " whatever that may be. Did
I hit the nail in the bull’s-eye on the head, or what?” “Lilin is a predominantly glacial
world, yes. And, yes, the araedic are primarily meat-eaters.” “Ba-bam, baby " I am right again!” He grinned. “God, I’m so good at this.” He took a handful of Aerin’s hair and
said, “You should probably do something about this. You’re ruining your
split-ends with . . . grease " ew. Seriously, fix this " cut it. Just do ‘something’!
This,” Johnny said, pulling at it, “is a travesty of global warming proportions.” She said, “I wasn’t aware global
warming was a problem anymore.” “Oh, it’s not. The keratans took
quick and proper care of that impending catastrophe.” “I also wasn’t aware human males
concerned themselves so much with aesthetics. It’s very . . . womanly.” “He prefers the term ‘effeminate’,
Aerin,” Mickey said. Johnny ignored his cousin. “Don’t
fool yourself into thinking life is anything more than a pageant show. Living is breeding. To breed, one must find a
mate. To find a mate, one must attract. To attract, one mustn’t look like an
Interan Revolution refugee. And, honey, I hate to break it to you " no, I don’t
", but you look like one.” “I guess I can accept that,” Aerin
said. He said, “Like a refugee stricken
with so’ordicho breast parasites, who was somehow bitten by a pit viper ten
minutes prior, and now suffers the effects of necrosis.” “Okay, okay " jeez, what’s wrong
with you? I get it. You’re starting to get a little offensive.” “Mei tila, that’s not even the
iceberg’s tip,” Mickey said under his breath, causing her to groan. Johnny asked, “Incredible " you
heard that?” She said, “Uh, it’s no big deal…” Johnny shook his head as if he were
a teacher whose lessons kept zooming over his student’s head " Aerin’s head. “Move back to point, shall we? We’ve
established that the araedic are carnivorous and make berth on a high-gravity
ice world. Yet, having said that, I can’t help feeling a mite bit perplexed.”
His eyes narrowed in confusion. With an eyebrow raised, Aerin asked
him, “Perplexed by?” “Sitting maybe five " no, that’s
not right ", three inches away from a carnivore that could be classed as an
alpha-level predator by galactic standards used to living in harsh terrains,
who has…” he took her wrist with one hand, and, one-by-one, straightened each
digit out with his other, “…opposable thumbs tipped with…” His face paled. “Y-your talons…” he stammered. “What of them?” she asked. “They’re very " how can I put this
politely? " um, they’re very . . . dirty " an atrocity really.” She rolled her eyes. “Okay, Mickey,
final verdict’s in.” He asked, “And the jury says?” “Your cousin is a… a… an a*s " yes,
that’s it! Your cousin is an a*s.” Straight-faced, Mickey told her,
“E-yep,” heartily popping the “P” sound. “At least this a*s grooms himself
properly " shame on you for not tending your nails. Now, where was I…?” “You were on opposable thumbs,
master,” Avery said. “Ah, right " good girl,” he said.
“The entirety of that list, along with an old-Earth Nordic barbarian’s taste
for morality and ethics " despite all of it, every single last thing, I’m unable
to smell the stink of meat, decaying or otherwise, on her breath. I was
practically mouth deep in your mouth, and I didn’t smell flesh " just some
major halitosis,” Johnny answered. “The smell,” she blushed, “is from
a plant-extract supplement I’ve been powering through, and I haven’t touched
meat, cooked or fresh, in a while.” Johnny
asked, “Why not? Meat-eaters with a license are allowed to hunt in the forest.
I imagine, with you being the daughter of Lord-King Aeos the Deranged, you
wouldn’t have trouble procuring one. Hell, I bet they’d let you hunt without a
license if you promised to keep daddy dearest away from their homes, their
women, and their families...” Mickey
grew uneasy, feeling tension squirm through the room. Johnny either didn’t care
or didn’t notice - how, he didn't know, since all of it was leveled at him. Aerin was about to pop, and
the keratan-human parter did ‘not’ want to be caught in the cross-fire. “Johnny,” Mickey said,
staring at his cousin. “Stand down, now.” That’s when Aerin said, “My reasons
are my own, and no one else’s.” “Fair
enough,” he said with a laugh, scooting over. Instantly, the heavy atmosphere
dissipated, and she faced Johnny, asking him, “You really and truly can infer
physiological and biological information with a mere glance?” “That, I can, my dear, but my
deduction wasn’t mere inferring,” he said, giving her a seated half-bow. Her face fraught with confusion,
she asked, “How then?” “Oh, V’seras Ruler of the All-Sea,
here we go again. Spirits, I have not sinned against thee; yet thou huntest my
soul to take,” Mickey muttered. “Talk about equivalent exchange…” Having exhausted the number of
times he could read his schedule without getting bored to the point of suicide
a few minutes earlier, his attention was focused on his new friend and
egomaniacal cousin. “Before the day of my glorious
birth…” He stood, raising his arms high and pointing his head towards the
ceiling. In silence, he stood there. Under his breath, Mickey continued
his muttering: “For I am a transgressor in the eyes of the furious spirits and
their All-Ruler, I repent in the name of… Oh, this is silly. Shut up, me,” he
thought aloud " for Aerin’s sake. Stifling laughter, she apparently
appreciated the gesture. “…when God said, ‘Let there be
light,' I came into being,” Johnny continued grandly after his dramatic
pause. “My father and mother, bored with fame, fortune, and finery, decided
that they wanted to fill the void in their then-meaningless lives. Deciding
that, no matter what the cost, they wanted the perfect son, a living symbol
of the Locke family’s perfection " aesthetically, physically, and mentally ",
they planned. And after, they created. “While inside my mother, a
handsomely-paid group of geneticists fiddled with my genes. As a result, I have
a highly-developed cerebral cortex. With minimal work, I became smarter than
the average human, faster than the average human, and a damned-sight prettier
than the average human.” Aerin asked, “Because of your
enhanced cerebral cortex?” He laughed, and said, “No " because
of my enhanced potential.” “The keratan are the only ones
besides the geray’ara to possess this technology"” “Yes, mei tila!” he interrupted. “I
am the product of human-keratan scientific cooperation.” “I knew it!” she clapped, smiling.
Ha, I knew it! I knew it wasn’t an urban legend or conspiracy theory.” “It was a conspiracy, but an urban
legend, it is not,” said Mickey. “Everyone knows humans and keratan
have been buddy-buddy since Second Contact back in twenty fifty-eight, that
they work together and share research, but to this extent…” She stood, poking and prodding him,
feeling his muscles and examining his head. “Hm, I always thought the apex of
human physiology would be . . . taller.” “Ah-ha, ha, you’re so funny,” he
said. Mickey laughed. “Touch on a
sensitive subject, did she, Short Legs?” “Don’t start with that, Mickey. I’m
five-nine,” he said. “Sure, with those boots,” Mickey
smarted-off. “Dear cousin, I can and will
destroy you.” Johnny glowered at him. Sarcastically, he said, “Short Legs
has a short fuse, no? " Who would’ve thought it?” Aerin, paying no attention to the
boys, seemed to be speaking to herself: “If, say, the sirians had that
technology, the results would be unbelievable. They’d become shock-and-awesome
troops " wow, Aerin, that was lame. …It’d give the strength, the edge needed to
push them over the impasse between our two species. After millennia of
bickering on it, they’d be declared the most capable war-artists. But, if the araedic got ahold of
it… well, our mechanical prosthesis modifications are great, but gene therapy
introduces an entirely new way to play the ball game...” The boys looked at her blankly,
causing her to stop her pondering. “Oh, you were listening?” They nodded. “Don’t be surprised. It makes you two
look like cornyac in a tank-rover’s headlights. Is it that surprising I know
what baseball is?” Glancing at each other and then
back to Aerin, the boys shrugged. “I also know what basketball is, and
volleyball, though I couldn’t begin telling you the difference between fútbol
and football. Are they not the same things? Speaking of which, can someone
please tell me what in the ‘hell’ rugby is?” “I think rugby’s like football,”
Avery offered. Aerin moaned, “Which football?” and
began rubbing her eyes with the palm of her hand. The boys shrugged, Avery remained
quiet, and Aerin shook her head, saying, “Humans…” Neither Johnny nor Avery deigned to
reply. Johnny did, however, say, “If you don’t mind, And Space Museum, I’m
going to sit back down,” instead. “Sure, sure,” she said, sitting
with him. After a while of awkward silence,
it was broken, unexpectedly, by Avery. Mickey wasn’t used to hearing her so
much. In truth, most of the times he saw her he forgot she was there almost as
quickly as he had noticed. “It is rather . . . overwhelming, being in the
presence of one of the first, if not ‘the’ first, absolute human…” Avery said,
trailing off. Aerin nodded, and said to Johnny, “I
shudder to think of the cost, the fortune spent creating… well, you " you must,
must have cost a fortune.” “A ‘large’ fortune,” he clarified,
“was paid by my loving parents for the quintessence of the perfect anatomically
modern human, indeed.” Mickey asked, “Are you happy,
Aerin?” with a roll of his eyes. “All the work I put into knocking this smug,
whale-sized prick off his damned high-horse and you, in sixty seconds, put him
right back in the saddle " thanks for that, yeah.” She blushed. “Sorry, Mickey,” she
said. “He’s just so . . . odd. Tell me, is there anything else you picked up
on?” “Hm, I see a lot, and know a lot;
but, I can’t see all, and, it pains me to say to say this, but I don’t know
all. Contrary to popular belief, I’m not omniscient, but I am closer than any
of you,” he said while his index finger and thumb grasped his chin. “There are
a few things " like how your hide makes injuring you a payless and thankless
job; it’s thick, coarse. The problem is solely thanks to your human DNA, which
doesn’t allow your endurance to be, er, up to snuff.” “Not necessarily true,” said
Mickey. “Araedic-human crosses have thicker hides than true-born humans, but can’t
go toe-to-toe with true-born araedics in that department " and many others.
She’s tough " just not as tough as pure-bloods; and she’s weak " just not as
weak as pure-bloods.” “Sounds like the makings of a
riddle,” Johnny pointed out. “I am not as strong as a pure-blood. Yet, at the
same time, I am not as weak as one. What am I?” “That was amusing,” Mickey said. “The likes of me, especially me "
hell, ‘only’ me -, always have a few choice moments hidden up a sleeve or two,
or three and four, five and six… You get the idea,” Johnny declared, his mouth
in a half-grin. Without hesitation, Mickey told his
cousin, “Yeah, no doubt about that. It’s too bad those moments are so few and
far between. You’d think with your ‘highly-developed cerebral cortex’ you’d be quicker
on the draw " awh, guess Auntie Francine and Uncle Max neglected to ask for the
wit toy with their kiddy meal.” With that said, he closed his eyes and relaxed. Johnny’s eye half-twitched and no
one besides Avery noticed, and he fake laughed at his cousin’s put-down. “You
have a talent for knocking me back off the horse, cuz.” “We all have our own little skills,”
said Mickey, smug-faced. “I guess being ‘perfect’ doesn’t really help much
humor-wise, huh? Oh, well, never, you mind your pretty, shaggy head.” “Stop pissing in the cabin, you
two. Contest or not, you’re making a mess,” Aerin said, exasperated. “Please,
boys, can’t we all just put our genitalia back in our underpants, save
urinating for bathroom times, and get along?” With a chuckle, Avery said, “I’m
going to like rooming with you for eight months.” * Quick
on his feet, Mickey charged. Barreling towards Aerin, he knew for certain he was
going to hit her this time " he was moving too fast not to. “No time to dodge
this one, eh?” he thought. Aerin’s
right arm was aloft and outstretched, her open-palmed right hand rested at eye
level. A few inches lower than her right, was her left arm. She placed her left
hand against her right arm’s bicep and squeezed her feet together, making them
face one another. Inching forward to meet Mickey’s
full-frontal assault, she pivoted, sidestepping him at the last second and
disappearing from his field of vision. As he
looked around, cursing himself for getting cocky, Aerin stood behind him. There
were a number of openings she could exploit, in a number of ways " some
dangerous, some not. Not wishing to hurt her friend, she
decided on a simple takedown. Switching her current style with another, she
loosened up her tense body. In a burst of speed, and without a moment’s notice,
she had his neck in the bend of her arm. Thrice, she rammed her fist into his
padded side. Despite the small, upward-pointing carbon-fiber-reinforced polymer
disks that made up the uniform’s first and second layer of protection, in complete
disregard of the ballistic padding, he felt her hits, her fists as if they were
cinderblocks being rammed into him. Seeing the thrice-repeated blows
had thrown his sense of balance out of whack, she knocked his feet out from
under him with a sweeping low-kick. Slammed his back into the ground, she straddled
him. With her knees planted firmly in
the soil and locked around his midriff, pinning him down, she brought down her
fist as if it were a hammer " Mjolnir, Thor’s hammer. Aimed directly at his more-amazed-than-flabbergasted
face, her fist cut through the air like a directed missile. Before her knuckles made contact
with his flesh, the alarm rang, signaling the round’s end. Two inches above the
bridge of Mickey’s nose, Aerin’s fist hovered. She had effortlessly stopped its
descent mid-punch. After standing up and quickly brushing herself off, she
offered her friend a hand, which he graciously accepted. After helping him to his feet, she took
it upon herself to scan Mickey for injuries. Mickey was too winded to protest "
much to his chagrin. “Line up,” Second Lieutenant Cody instructed,
interrupting her inspection. The cadets obeyed and formed a line without
difficulty. There had been no edge to his voice; he didn’t need one. “Nice job,
you lot,” said the lieutenant, walking in front of his cadets " who had
arranged themselves neatly. Examining each progressor, he
barked commendations and damnations where he deemed necessary. He stopped in front of Handbook Boy,
whose face was still in the ground where Avery had planted it. With a single
fist to his chin, she knocked him straight off his feet, and caught him by the
shoulders before he fell to the ground. Transitioning seamlessly, she got
behind him, elbowed him in the back of the head, and sent him face-first into
the ground where she then stomped the back of his head a single time. “Cadet
Clark,” he exhaled, shaking his head, “why am I not surprised? Get your sorry
a*s off the ground. Cadet Key didn’t hit you that hard.” Cadet Clark moaned, tried to climb
to his feet, and failed. “For the love of… Cadet Locke,” he
said, to Johnny, “pick Cadet Clark up and, if you’d be so kind, get him to his
hall and out of his, my, and everyone else’s misery " he’s done for the day.” Johnny said, “Yes, sir " I’m on it,
sir.” “Ah, ‘I’m on it, sir.’ " Music to
my ears when my wife says it, and music when you pups say it. Good work, by the
way. What was that " three or six punches?” “Six, sir,” Johnny said. “Doesn’t matter how many there
were, it was poetry in motion " a sonnet, mind you, none of that experimental
hogwash that’s popular nowadays.” “Uh, thank you, sir " I think...” Johnny
got out of line and strolled over to where Cadet Clark lay on the ground. Lifting him, he whispered in his
ear, “Word of advice, comrade: When she charges you outright, she wants you to
think she’s going for a gut-punch, or a gut-kick, or a low-kick so you’ll try
guard your lower body. That’s when she gets you. She feints, and, at the last
moment, switches form and dishes out an uppercut. You’re lucky she got you once
and not escalator-style " one right after the other. You’ll think it’ll never
stop…” As they walked away, Mickey heard
Johnny tell the young man, “…away from her fists, away from her entirely. Use
your longer reach to your advantage ... Yeah " I found that out the hard way,
too.” “Other Locke,” the Lieutenant said to Mickey, stopping
in front of him. “Keep at it. You’re going to have to improve ten-by-tenfold if
you want to even be considered for the Blue Outfit, but, as I said, keep at it.” “Yes,” Mickey said. “I will do
better, sir.” “You ’will’ do better, eh? Nice attitude,
Locke " confidence, I like.” He turned away and, with a salute to Aerin, he
said, “That was some fancy footwork, Cadet Hanin. Araedic war-artists, particularly
those of your caliber, are war assets through and true.” Both nodded " Mickey, stone-faced,
Aerin blushing furiously. Continuing down the line, he barked
here, congratulated there. He said to Avery, “That was a beautiful uppercut,
Cadet Key. Of course, I expect no different after seeing your phenomenal
performance during the physical entrance exam of which you were the sole star.” “Normally, sir, I do not accept
compliments on principle, but, coming from you, it is an honor.” The second lieutenant laughed. “If
I remember correctly, you placed in the one percent, beating out the other
ninety-nine by a significant margin " excluding Cadet Locke ", isn’t that
right?” Astonished, a few of the other
cadets stood on tip-toes to better enable them to catch sight and size-up their
newest, biggest threat in the race to Blue Outfit. Only a handful would be
chosen to test for that honor, a special place on the thrones of the stars " a
special place more exclusive than the testing seats were. Clueless about the specifics of the
examination, the adolescents and young adults knew one thing: They would be
waging war against one other for a place at the Blue Outfit table. “Sir, with all due respect,” she
said, formally, perfectly. “I don’t care much for the ways of braggarts, so I,
with the utmost respect, am inclined to refuse"” “Easy there, Cadet. You don’t want
to start refusing orders so earlier in your career.” “You didn’t give me an order, sir.” “Damn, thought I did. As your
superior, yada-yada, by the power vested in me, I command you to admit you’re a
damn-fine prospective war-artist.” “Lieutenant, I"” “I’m stopping you right there,” he
cut her off, yet again. “Make this easier on us, you, me, your fellow pups, and
do as I say.” “I"” “I " thank you for beginning my
sentence for me " suggest slowing your roll and listening when I say
acknowledging your prowess isn’t ‘bragging’; it’s acknowledgement " strictly.” She hesitated. “Um, then, yes "
yes, it was me. Er, I… I did that.” Mickey heard some of the recruits
whistle, mutter, and nod their head approval. Mostly, the majority kept silent. Teasingly, he asked, “Forgetting
something, cadet?” “Oh, sir, oh, no " I’m so, so
sorry, Lieutenant! I, uh, I got… Don’t worry, sir; I won’t let it happen again,
sir. I’ll swear it on my life if you give me another chance.” “Jeez,” he rolled his eyes, giving
a short, nonchalant wave of his hand, “at ease, cadet.” “Yes, of course, sir,” she said. When the lieutenant finished his
round, Mickey, groaning, but on his feet, whispered to Aerin, “Again, you made
me look a fool and, simultaneously, a child. " How? I don’t know; I never now "
I swear, if it wasn’t for this uniform, I would be laid-up in med-bay with
internal bleeding,” he said, examining the disk-plated full-body suit they had
been issued that morning. The black and white uniforms,
form-fitting, able to soak up directed-energy-concentrating firearms (or DECFs)
fire, protected the chest and abdomen, upper and lower back with two layers of a
newly-discovered and commissioned medium-weight ballistics fabric created by
sirian craftsmen. Along with his upper body, his legs
were also safeguarded, by doubling-up the legs’ disks. “Oh, please, you didn’t do that badly,”
she comforted. “Are you aware I’m clueless when it
comes to hand-to-hand combat?” he asked her. “I became painfully aware of that somewhere
between the third and fourth time I threw you to the ground,” she said,
matter-of-factly. “Head to the northern building,
cadets,” Cody instructed. “It’s time to begin your next lesson. Dismissed,” he
grunted. © 2012 Brenden Bow |
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