Butterflies

I see you in there tiny butterflies

Trying to sneak on me with your surprise

Tickling me and making me giggle

When you guys are so little

Bouncing around here and there

Moving around without a care

Distracting me with all your guiles

Always around to make me smile

Cause you know when I see her

My heart creates a stir

And you take this as a sign

You know her heart’s mine

But I’m in love don’t you see

Don’t laugh, just leave me be

She’s a cute girl that I adore

Who opened my heart’s door

So I let her walk right in

And there she lies within

Resting there safe and sound

Til you all go an pound

To make my heart beat

Every single time we meet

You silly fools, you’ll give me away

With your skipping around in disarray

But without you, how would I know

About this feeling that makes me glow

So thank you butterflies

For not telling lies

She is the one and this you know

The one who will never let me go

Author's Note

This poem was supposed to delve into the childish mindset and portray love simplistically and as a child would.

Reviews

[Underestimated]

awww. I think my heart melted while reading this. I know teenage butterflies, let me tell you.

[McNamara]

Personifying the feeling of fluttering as butterflies personal to yourself is a fantastic concept. Ideas like that are golden and show something special. The idea alone was enough to make me love this and then you told a story as well.

[Laura E. Aranda]

love it

You silly fools, you’ll give me away

With your skipping around in disarray

But without you, how would I know

About this feeling that makes me glow

So thank you butterflies

For not telling lies

She is the real deal, that you know

[Hyatt Vincent]

congrats on gold! well deserved!

[Hyatt Vincent]

very cute. i think this poem applies 2 a lot of little kids when they hav crushes ^^

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very nicely written. enjoyed the rhyme scheme

[Fantasia Allmighty]

this is very good

[Sagar Waingankar]

Hehe good one man! It sounds pretty good, a quite childish, a quite loveable! Your loved one will definitely feel secured and sound after reading this one! You are kind by heart! Take care brother and spread the message of love ~Love and Light~

[Dearantlers]

Ah, this is beautiful!!!! Last time I read it, I thought you were talking of actual butterflies, like monarchs, and ones like that, but I guess I'm more alert right now. LIke I said before, you are a really good poet!

[Sarah]

it is so beauterful, lovely meaning of a true heart