Unconditionally

Unconditionally

A Poem by Brelove
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Torn feelings

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Pushing you away
pulling you close
give me my space
lets take things at my pace
You want to love me
as i want to love you
but my heart knows not what it once knew
I tell you to leave, you ask to leave for good
No I don't want you to leave, I just wished you understood
I want you in my world,but not just yet
 Who knew I would find love when we first met
I will hurt you but not intentionally
being with me at this moment can hurt you physically and emotionally 
You choose to stick around until things get better
You vowed to stay grounded with me unconditionally 

© 2016 Brelove


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Brelove
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This seems like its straight from your heart and filled with mixed emotions, its very deep and quite powerful, with great meaning behind it. Pretty moving piece.
I enjoyed the read.
Keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brelove

8 Years Ago

Thank you. It definitively has great meaning behind it. Thanks again I really appreciate.
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

your welcome anytime :)
Seems to me like contrasting emotions overlaping on a loom of the hearts finally coming to a conclusion that both wanted to begin with. Really nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brelove

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I would agree.

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