Sleep

Sleep

A Poem by BreannaAutumn

My sleep is the only place 
I get to see your face anymore
If I could close my eyes forever 
and dream of you
I just might
I just might
Those pretty eyes
Those lovely lips
Keep me broken into bits
Why must you be so cruel
as to leave my side?
Can't we try to compromise?
I know it's late
but you're on my mind
Come stay the night
Just one last time
You've heard it once
but I still whisper it
No one else
could ever love you like this

© 2014 BreannaAutumn


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Words of love whispered the gentle kind your always on their minds Bless the world for love is blind some just can't see the hell they caused.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful, I enjoyed this extremely. I love poems that are short but still packed full of emotion and story. Bravo for doing what few can actually achieve. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BreannaAutumn

10 Years Ago

thank you very much!!

You've heard it once
but I still whisper it
No one else
could ever love you like this

Above lines are brilliant my friend..great work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you put my thoughts on paper, eloquently.

''Just one last time''

Is it ever, one last time ?

Posted 10 Years Ago


I've never left your side
nor have I shown my face
just dig it
between the sheets, babe
HAI!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


So cool to me. I really like this one and the longing of her. Well done...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack Kennedy

10 Years Ago

Him* sorry for that typo!!!
My sleep is the only place
I get to see your face anymore
If I could close my eyes forever
and dream of you
I just might.

This was most prettiest dream ever. Very romantic dear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


a romantic dream the best place to live out your fantasy

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice piece of writing here... But please tell me what sleep is? I have never heard of it... lol

Posted 10 Years Ago



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BreannaAutumn
BreannaAutumn

Rathdrum, ID



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Hey everyone. I'm Breanna and I'm 19 years old. I'm a college student. I'm bisexual, so you will find alternating genders in my writing. If you write a review on a piece of mine I will do the same for.. more..

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