Our Love

Our Love

A Poem by BreannaAutumn

I lay in this bed tonight
The one we made love in
Surrounded by the things of mine I once considered yours
Ours
In this house that was so full of happiness while you were here
The light shining a little brighter through these windows
foggy from our breathing
Together in unison
In this world that only existed for your eyes
Only thrived when your hand held mine
Only beautiful with your smile to light up my life
Our futures so clear I could cry
and it still wouldn't become blurry
Held in your promise was my happiness
Or my despair
Just don't let it go
Don't set it free
it's right in front of us
With you here next to me
Pull me in close, love
And tell me I'm the one
Tell me I'll be the only girl to make you come undone
Kiss me like your first
and love me like your last
I'll forget about the pain
I'll forget about the past
All that matters is right here, right now
With your lips against mine
This moment is forever
but still lost in time

© 2013 BreannaAutumn


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Nice love poem ever a asking to share again and again Like it used to be.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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You write of love so eloquently. This is what true love should be like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, your writing style brings it all together very nicely, well written. Congratulations.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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BreannaAutumn

11 Years Ago

thank you so much:)

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Added on September 27, 2013
Last Updated on September 30, 2013
Tags: love, time

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BreannaAutumn
BreannaAutumn

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Hey everyone. I'm Breanna and I'm 19 years old. I'm a college student. I'm bisexual, so you will find alternating genders in my writing. If you write a review on a piece of mine I will do the same for.. more..

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