Along Came A Spider

 

 

A poem floated,

resonating.

Indigo sadness..

and the train swept through-

missing every stop.

 

Then along came a spider

pierced            tattooed

mirror imagery.

The greatest of aphrodisiacs,

ruined for life.

Reviews

[JRB]

short and nice

Its been a few years since I have read any of your poetry Bree, but I love this one. Its very short but ever so elegant.

[Ricohard]

Other poems are full on...i like this one the the most...should change your picture to one of the ones you had as your facebook.
And add more friends so they can read your poems...i re read your first ones on here...they are amazing!...these last ones seem like a cathartic release or explosion of hatred...why didnt you use big words around me?