You

 

 

 

It started as a thought

then grew,

into this

    you take up my mind.

 

Trampoline in my stomach

this

     was never

     meant

      to happen

too late now

to go back-

life

as i know it,

over.

 

Love X2

impossible

possible.

 

Safe

no

more

old starts to fade,

new

shines blindingly

until,

all I can see

is you.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Judy Emery/ Lilly Emery]

A very interesting write.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful expression of love, focusing every moment of life on the one who brings you alive!!! So wonderful and soft!!!

[Ricohard]

wHOA! C'mon that was good. Better than i expected.
It felt like the feeling of the poem is in a dark misty cloud, and the sun breaks through right at the end.
Really loved "Trampoline in my stomach".
Very good indeed!

great poem breeza

I think this is good. I think my favorite lines are Lovex2, impossible, possible. That to me says a lot. Very good poem!