Jaded EnvyA Chapter by AnynomusPrelude and 1st chapterPrelude: The shadowed figure slunk through the woods behind Rayne, Jade, and Lori Anderson's home. They opened the door and slipped quietly into the kitchen. Scoping the girl sitting in the chair watching TV in the living room, they crept up and stuck the revolver to her head and whispered quietly, "Give me the entire inheritance or i'll shoot." the gunshot echoed through the house, and Rayne Anderson, was dead.
Chapter 1: "Victoria, are you sure this is the right place?" whispered the frightened Jacie Edwards, Victoria Edwards's younger sister. "Yes Jacie, this is 132 Dickens Glenn, Right? "Right! And you don't have to treat me like a child, i'm 18 years old, perfectly capable of solving a murder mystery on my own thank you!" "Uhuh, and I'm 19 and a half and the one with experiance here! Besides mind on track Jacie!" They walked up to the door of a relevantly modern three story home sitting on a hill in Hersey, Pennsilvaina. Victoria took a deep breath and gently rapped upon the large oak door. What they saw, astonished them. She was about 6'1 with stick straight black hair flowing to the middle of her back. She was wearing a skimpy red satin dress that came to her mid-thighs and black stilleto's that only added to her extreme height. "Um, hi. I'm Victoria Edwards, this is my sister Jacie we're here to investigate the murder of , um, Rayne Anderson, may we come in and ask you a few questions?" The womans crystal blue eyes were wet with tears, She sniffed and in a pure glorious voice answered, "Sure come on in girls." to be continued.... © 2009 AnynomusAuthor's Note
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2 Reviews Added on October 25, 2009 AuthorAnynomusNOT TELLINGAboutI love to write but i choose to remain anynomus . LOVES FREDDY KRUGER!!!! more..Writing
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