“The Eternal Dance”

“The Eternal Dance”

A Poem by Bree Orlock
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A poem about life

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Spiraling around the merry-go-round of life,

We make our lives into an ever spinning

dance

 

In moments of pause we stop to gather

our thoughts so that our eternal dance

can move from place to place

 

When our velocity slows, our dance begins

to find its final resting place

 

And when we stop, our children take up

our places in this eternal merry-go-round

dance of life.

 

 

By

Bree Orlock

2018

© 2023 Bree Orlock


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The analogy of a merry-go-round brings the dance to light. Utter perfection, Bree. So wonderful to meet you!

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Bree Orlock
Bree Orlock

Cincinnati, OH



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I am the Owner and Managing Editor of Stardust Publications. I am also the author of Coming into the Light by Bree Orlock. I am a Lesbian from Cincinnati Ohio. more..

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