Life Speech

A short speech I wrote.

 

Adults tell kids to grow up, but is there such a thing as growing up too fast?

  They tell us, the real world is like a war- you have to be per paired for battle, but no one told us that you need ammo for the gun.

        Yes, we will get hurt- Physically and emotionally but that will not stop us from finishing our journey.

   You have to pay attion to the small things, because all the small things will eventually add up to one big thing; you’re life story.

            Life has two paths the right and the wrong path, but only you can decide which one to walk.

   Abraham Lincoln once said, "And in the end, it’s not the years in your life that count. It’s the life in your years."

                There are moments in your life that make you and set’s the course of who you're going to be. Sometimes they're little sutle moments. Sometimes they're big moments you never saw coming. No one asks for their life to change, but it does. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you are.

  

Author's Note

Sorry for any grammer mistakes if there are any.

Reviews

[ayn0nimus]

I like it. :)
But add more..I dont think I like the last line, too cliche..Maybe add another line at the end change the order of the sentences.

Check my writing out sometime if you get a chance :)

[YoungWriter20095]

WOW this is really really good kepp it up sis