My Mask

Everyone was born with the face they were ment to have so instead of hating it and wanting to change it flawnt it because the to big of a nose or those to small of eye's make you who you are.

My eyes are too big

My nose looks like a twig

        Lips of a sad clown

Face that scares a whole town

        I want; I need, please oh please.

A bag makes my head look square

        A sock I can not bare

A hat to large

        A hood to small.

A mask I try

        I hide in disguise

My perfect eyes

        My normal nose

My lips just the right height

        And a face that shines so bright..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your grammar is very good. I like this poem. We live in a world who see perfection on TV and movies. I believe perfection is in the eyes of the beholder. A good heart and ability to be content will bring someone lucky to find you when you are ready. A excellent poem. I like the ending.

Coyote

[YoungWriter20095]

Girl this is a very good poem........And i agree with Coyote your grammer is very good...and nobody can be perfect not even celbs ily girl

[Sara]

Ha sorry I'm not the best at my grammer.

[TTBoy28]

Wow! Good job! "To" should be "too"...but, then again, after reading it over - "to" actually works. What do you think?