The Hunger

The kiss ended
The taste lingering
The hunger consumes.

Good night has been said
And He has gone home.

On my flesh i can still
Feel Him.
On my tongue i can still
Taste Him.

i hunger to be
Back in His arms
The kiss unended.

The tears fall
The hunger consumes.

Reviews

[Tenebrousoul]

This was great, but short. I like the images you evoke. I felt it could've been a little longer, though. It just cuts short. Still great, though.

[Kristine Ferg]

So real, like it was the reader being ripped from a lover's grasp. Lustfully dewy, and so well writ

[ΨXO]

Lust-driven and full of raw desire. It clearly showed the urge of bodily compassion and wanting. Rawr tiger.