Wild Animals

I made this about a year ago when I had gotten bored.

WILD ANIMALS

LANEY

(Yelling) Nora. What did I tell you about going into my room.

NORA

Oh, shutup. I was not in your room.

LANEY

Then why does it look like an animal has been in here.

NORA

Maybe biscuit got in.

LANEY

Really? I’ve never heard of a pig picking a lock.

NORA

Oh. No. I did that.

LANEY

Why would you do that?

NORA

I wanted to annoy you. And besides, you said I couldn’t go in there. You said nothing about picking the lock.

LANEY

Okay. Let's make a deal. Next time you or your pig or any other of your animals get into my room, I let Beast out.

NORA

You wouldn’t.

LANEY

Who’s to say I haven’t already?

NORA

I don’t see him. Besides, you’re not that crazy. Mom would flip.

LANEY

Oh (pause and starts laughing) but I am.

(Laney walks away to her pet room and returns holding one end of a leash in her hand.)

Excuse me, little sister? What was it that you were saying?

NORA

(Nora looks up and notice Beast standing beside Laney, and jumps up on the couch.)

Laney! What is wrong with you? Put that lion back in its cage.  

LANEY

Wrong. He’s a Bengal Tiger. And I imagine he’s very hungry, since I haven’t been here to feed him today.

NORA

Don’t go back in your room. Got it. Now put it away.

LANEY

(Laughing) I had a feeling you would see it my way. I’m going back to my room now.

NORA

Good. You’re psychotic.

LANEY

Please. You’re just trying to flatter me.

(Laney walks away smiling like a goofball)

Author's Note

I want to film two of my sisters doing this scene. Any suggestions on making it better, or good to go?

Reviews

[wordman]

i can see your name in lights

[Great Aunt Astri]

Brilliant and original. Good to go.

[Dr. Wood ?]

unusual to say the least, I might leave out the sisters names...and just use different colours for each one's piece

[AaronFreitas]

haha awesome dialogue between two sisters... sounds like something my sisters would do :)

[Emily]

I love this!
Keep it up!!