The joy it brings

The joy it brings

A Poem by Breadrun
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A poem about my favourite thing, almost cryptic until the end

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The joy it brings

No one knows the joy it brings
To me, myself, my brothers, my kin
This lucrative world that is widely known
Easy accessible even on the phone

As time gets nearer to the start
I know I’ll follow with all my heart
The shouting, the laughter spreading fast
We know we face a heavy task

Spending the money saved in my tin
The gates turn clockwise letting us in
Nerves turn to excitement as we walk up the stand
Turning to friends and that bald headed man

As the sweat pours down my clammy palm
I need to find a sense of calm
For the next ninety minutes I will be immersed
In this glorious game we start first

Football is what I truly rejoice
My hope, my dream, my only choice
Red is the colour of my attire
Much like an English stag or deer
It marches proudly towards the tree’s 
Unlike those little Barnet bee’s

The game kicks off with a loud mighty cheer
As I stand upon the rusty third tier
These people know the joy it brings
To me, myself, my brothers, my kin

© 2011 Breadrun


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lol I am from England and we call football what you call soccer, I am not talking about american football :) but thanks for your review, I'm glad you could picture everything

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem, it is really captivating and it is explicitly detailed. one can picture everything in the poem. its a cool poem, although i am more of an soccer fan myself :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


The feeling is no less for American football fans, man. Funny thing is, being called football here, your poem can easily fit to mean our football (except for the "Red, attire/english stag/barnet" stuff). Much more of a soccer fan anyway, to be honest.

Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Breadrun
Breadrun

Lowestoft, Suffolk, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm Breadrun, I live in Lowestoft and have just started writing properly, I've always felt im creative and can talk about any topic and hopefully that will show in my writing, I find it easier .. more..

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