Forbidden Love

This was a poem that I originally wrote for the book Romeo and Juliet. It really inspired me and I hope it inspires you as well. Please enjoy!

 

A look into each others eyes

 

Lust, passion, and tears.

 

Forbidden is the love,

 

but neither can deny,

 

For we brawl over ruling,

 

Yet sing of love.

 

For the undeniable truth,

 

That your heart is mine.

 

For only life leads to death,

 

and only death lets us live.

 

For these barriors are unpenetrable,

 

and only with love can they be pried.

 

For uniting into one will never be our sin,

 

but only the begining of what seems to be the end.

 

Author's Note

So, just e-mail me with ideas for new poems or how i could improve! Tell me what you think! ~Sakaya Uchiha

Reviews

[breezygirl]

veerrry gooood

[Autumn Alvira]

that................was...............AMAZING..................and it totaly will inspire me.......................nice job

[Wildecat]

I think you did a very nice job on this poem, I enjoyed reading it.

[Shugotenshi1692]

it hit home with me. probably because that is how my love life has been. keep at it!!!!!!!!

[Madara Uchiha]

wow thats incredible i have no idea on how to say how good.

[Witness 2 Humanities In..]

You suck i hate it...go die. NOT JUST KIDDING...UIT WAS AWESOME!.
*~*~*Uchiha Saruna*~*~*

[Faith-Jolie]

Wow!!! This is amazing!!! I normally hate any re-make of Shakespearean literature or anything related to it that's written by anyone one else, but I must say, this is really good!

[zoecranberry]

hey, your poem is great! i was just looking around, then i saw it, i was attracted to the title, ans so by the poem, this is really nice!