Day 7: Purple Envy 2/18/13

Boreddddddddd XD

Alone, alone, alone,

Sands effortlessly creeping over me,

Such stiffling boredom,

Such wreckless glee.

Farewells before the highest point,

Now my bed a wreck,

No sheets on joints,

Wrapped up in purple envy.

Dreams come and find me nestled under that cozy wedge,

The tv blares some show I knew,

Yet still I was taken right over the hedge,

And the purple envy glazed me over into the sandmans view.

The clock hands whirred and I sat up straight,

Already it was night, time didn't want to wait.

Author's Note

All critique appreciated :3

Reviews

[Lee]

oooOh that last line really hits you...

you have a very unique way of describing things... I definitely enjoyed this.
every line really stands out in its own way. nice work :)

[Alice Crypt; Brittany]

Thanks ^_^ I try my best! I've been taking a lot of influence from poets that were taught in my courses this semester. A lot of them stuck to me subconciously xD