The Perfect Flight

The wind is right, we have the power

To sail the two of us ten miles an hour

The balloon's flame shall so furiously drive

With the one I love - I'm so alive

The path on course sets out with the sun

Laughter, inspiration, holding on as one

Floating above the willows it's champagne at three

In Rhyll, England at six ready for tea

At London by eleven dancing to the tunes

Home asleep by two dreaming of balloons

Reviews

[steppenwolf]

Lyrical, well-crafted, fun to read.

[Leo Gems]

I enjoyed this poem. It is has a romantic flair to it with a happy and peaceful tone. It sounds like so much fun to be in an air balloon.. but truly I would need an experienced pilot to enjoy the experience.

A well written piece..

[J.Black]

I liked this poem alot!
It was written well, and I'm sure it holds a deep connection to you.