Marching Towards BerlinA Story by Brandon LeeI wrote this during my spare time. I would love some constructive criticism.Staring ahead, a middle-aged but still-handsome man with
vibrant brown hair, pale complexion, and slightly overweight physique glanced
up and saw the great looming expanses of the Alps towering overhead. Letting
his imagination run wild, he dreamed that they were some mystical, ancient
tribe of unwavering giant warriors guarding and blocking his path to the
Promised Land. He did so with as much ardor and enthusiasm as he had as a
younger man when he had spent the summers in these very mountains. Spurned into the recollection of a treasured memory, Brian
could do nothing but picture the hopeful notion of someday returning home to
his summer villa in the Austrian alpines and spending one more day relaxing in
the sunlit hillside of his inherited estate. He remembered drinking his
favorite mix of champagne while listlessly staring off into the horizon, his
eyes caressed by the beautiful view and his body stroked by the light, soothing
warmth of the gentle sun overhead. The breeze would gently blow southward, wafting
in the cool, fragrant smell of the Edelweiss flowers that grew in the northern
lands of Germany. But all that was behind him now. At this very moment, Brian was steadily marching with his
troop towards the heart of Germany, Berlin, from their departure point in
Chamonix in France. It had been a grueling journey to arrive at this point to
say the least, as Brian had fought through countless battles and skirmishes in
this god-forsaken war, having been present when he fled his home country of
Austria when the Nazis had first annexed it, and having had landed in Normandy,
during the infamous battle of “D-day” that is accredited to have saved the
allied forces from certain defeat. Brian had lost a great many friends in his trek towards
Germany, including his childhood playmate and only true companion, Sam, who was
shot straight through the head by a German sniper and died instantly while they
were in landing craft off the shores of Germany, readying to land. Brian still
remembered the light leaving Sam’s eyes as he laid sprawled out on Brian’s lap,
with brain matter and blood splattered on Brian’s clothes. Looking down, Brian
noted that these stains were still ever-present on his tattered uniform. “Stop, Troop 32 move in and look for any remaining Germans or
civilians!” Brian heard his commanding officer yell. Of course Major Armstrong would be absent-mindedly yapping
out his orders to us; while sitting on his combat truck completely immersed in
his comfortable mobile command center, enjoying whatever comforts that would be
afforded despite our current embarkation. Despite his name, Major Armstrong was
a man of feeble frame and even worse character. Brian wondered how he had even
managed to receive the rank of Major. Perhaps family ties in the Allied Armies? The skies were darkening and it seemed like the heavens were
right about to burst with their tears, ready to cleanse the bloodied earth when
the Major’s troops began the arduous journey of clearing the home the Major had
pointed out. While exploring about, kicking over the fallen beams and shattered
glass, Private Brian in Troop 32 of the 5th Battalion remarked about
how familiar this morbid setting seemed. Certainly, the shattered buildings and
detonated landscape weren’t giving away any clues to what this desolated
landscape once was, and the fresh craters from the mortar shells that had flown
over this area only but a few hours ago did not help. Despite the multitude of
these peculiar new landmarks that rendered the scenery around here all but
recognizable, Brian was sure he had seen this place before. The rediscovery of the connection of this countryside to
Brian was hanging on the inside of his mind by only a thread, threatening to
detach itself at any moment. Suddenly, a wave of understanding came over the
young protagonist. This was his summer manor! Suddenly overcome with a wave of
emotion for his past life, Brian broke down on the unkempt ground and burst
into tears. How could his life have come to this? Brian thought. He fell over
crying as the first droplets of rain began to make their journey downwards from
the omnipresent clouds above, covering him and trickling down the giant Alps, which
would forever keep their vigilant watch into the horizon. © 2014 Brandon LeeAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorBrandon LeeDiamond Bar, CAAboutI am current attending high school and live in California. I enjoy writing as a hobby. more..Writing
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