You.....Me......And Us.........

I wonder how you manage to do,

The things that you do,

Your amazing to me, with always something that is new,

The time of a week, to mull over and chew,

The wondrous events that take place,

In just a day spent with you.

 

When I look at you it's hard to believe,

All the things we can achieve,

In a love so fast paced, but yet so real,

Sometimes it's nice to sit and just breathe.

 

And as we sit on the couch, I will try my very best,

Not to be a bore, not to be a grouch,

For as we relax and reminisce, of how it all started with a kiss,

How grand it will be, a timeless bliss.

 

I promise you this,

 

I'll never take you for granted,

And forever remeber the day,

Where our relationship was planted,

 

To keep our love on a even keel,

 

Never to become slanted.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

Love is pouring out of your words! Great write:-)

[kdpgrahi]

A good read, I can enjoy

[Mr. ECHO]

good. no hidden meanings in you.

[Sukriti Suki]

What could be better than knowing what you have when you have it...valuing a thing of value will never do wrong. Wonderful poem, exceptional thought.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very wise. When you got something good. Best to hold on and be content. Most people learn too late they held a diamond and allow it to escape. I like the ending to your outstanding poem.
Coyote

[J Todd Underhill]

Well done, I do not envy her though, I have seen what my wife goes through holding on to a love a poet, for 17 years, and it is a hard road indeed!

[TheElfPrincess]

Wonderful. I really loved it, because the emotions were so fresh. Well done.

[EMF]

Sounds like you've pulled.
What a terrific poem. Not sweet, but romantic. A realised poem that is beuatiful. Cannot fault it.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A trusted and fever pitched piece, well done

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great poem:)