I Dream.

I dream of a girl, every night,

She's perfect and special,

Such a beauty to hold in my sight.

 

Her nature is kind with a mischevous streak,

Her smile is flawless, her skin is gorgeous,

But it's always her eyes that make me feel weak.

 

A hug from her is the greatest gift,

Caring and warm, tender and soft,

For just one i'd tear in time a rift.

 

Her kisses are like the yummiest sweets,

Soft and sugary, but sometimes spicy like the hottest chilli,

For me they are the greatest of all treats.

 

I dream of a girl, every day,

She's perfect and special,

"I love you" just doesn't cut it,

So I hope this says it in a special way.

Reviews

[Mr. ECHO]

to the point.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Cracking romantic poem :)

[J Todd Underhill]

Well done, poetry often is inspired by a beautiful form, and she should be honored that you wrote this for her!

[TheElfPrincess]

Dreams can have very many meanings and reasons. This is a very lovely poem, describing a good dream. Well written.

[kdpgrahi]

Well done. The girl is symbolic I could guess. A very positive, lovely feeling I think which you term as a girl. Good analogy

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most dancing worded poem, well done, made me smile

[michaela]

This is incredibly cute!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem of love and dreams. To keep love alive we must be kind and loving to the people willing to stay with us. Thank you for the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

[Coffee Vampier]

Aw how romantic! i love this "So I hope this says it in a special way."
words from a lover are special in their very own way :)