A Fateful Day. © 02/07/11

From years gone by to present day

Lifes burdens have always hindered my way

Time and energy wasted to stay

On track, and not float astray.

 

Until that one fateful day.

 

A stunning blonde set my mind to play

And realitys edges no more shall fray

Tables have turned, the world no longer grey

Saved from being my own minds prey.

 

And until the next fateful day.

 

Forever by your side i shall stay

And should your stress cause you delay

Upon my shoulder your head can lay.

 

Until our last fateful day.

Reviews

[Coffee Vampier]

"Forever by your side i shall stay
And should your stress cause you delay
Upon my shoulder your head can lay.

Until our last fateful day."

these lines are so moving... I love that you separated the line "Until our last fateful day." It makes such an impact

[EMF]

Lovely. So far as love poetry goes NZ ahs deep waters

[Sarah Hobbit]

OMG that is so amazing hun! it nearly made me cry.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love and thankfulness. When a kind woman take your hand and allow you in. You want the first day to last forever. I like how you made your point in this poem.
"Forever by your side i shall stay
And should your stress cause you delay
Upon my shoulder your head can lay."
Thank you the outstanding poem.
Coyote