Sunrise ©

A bright blue sky,

nothing compares to the feeling of staring into your eyes.

 

Passion and romance,

A relationship smooth and flowing ,

Like a neverending dance

 

A warm fire,

Sand in our hair,

Caressing my loves skin,

Soft as cashmere

 

Together at last under starry sky,

Happily losing myself into your eyes,
A fantastic dream,

A timeless bliss,

Unto the next sunrise.

Reviews

[EMF]

I like this poem. To begin with the second line seemed a little long, but after re-reading a couple of times I think I was wrong. It works. Suggestions? Leave it all as it is.

[BeccaB]

i like this poem its well writen and well worded, the imagery is brilliant and its so touching

[Sarah Hobbit]

I must say i do really like this poem! hehe