The Untouchable

for you mom and any other single parent

The Untouchable

By Brandon Roderick

 

My mom could fight off a entire army of soldiers

If it meant protecting her sons. Shes a tough mean but sweet son of a gun

Anyone who knows her will tell you

That she is nice sweet but will hurt you in a heart beat to protect her own

Shes a stubborn one ill tell you that

But the sweetest all in one

She will give you the cloths of her own back to keep anyone warm

Shes taught me that ways of being a man even though she is ownly a women

She has more humanity then any teenager in this world

She will always be here for own friends and family even when times are tough

Shes been through hell but manages to come through kicking and screaming

She could lead a army through a minefield without one soldier getting hurt her mother instints

Warn her of any danger around

She loves her animals the whole zoo of them

She will make you smile even when your down

She has the words of a angel when you hear nothing but evil

Shes always has something to say even when you do something right

But I love her all the same

Shes put up with a lot in her life

Like all the stupid stunts me and my brothers pulled growing up

Her heart is made of gold to big for any person to own

Yet she carrys it and spreads it everywhere she goes

She is one of the best people you will ever get to know

She raised me right better then any other person could

There isn’t a thing in this world you could do to stop her love

Shes done the best job a single mother can

She stepped up to take on the job of two parents all alone

She is as strict as a drill instructer who didn’t get his morning joe

But as sweet as a puppys glow

Shes made mistakes in her life

We all have once or twice

But nothing in this world can judge her

Mistakes are human nature

She has given so much and had so little

But now she stands queen of her never ending castle

The loves the peasents as though they are royalty

In her kindom no one is below one another

Because my mother is

Untouchable

Author's Note

hope you like it mom

Reviews

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I LOVED IT!! Great job Brandon !!

[Brandon Varnado]

thanks it means alot is there anything you can see that needs to be edited or changed

[Jamestown]

That was so great to read, I have a mother that I think the world of as well and gathering from your words, they must of went to the same
how to be a great mother and wonderful person school, lol. Thx for sharing and God bless you and your mom. ..

[Brandon Varnado]

no thank you its my first attempt to write so im glad it turned out ok and yeah there are some amazing women in this world that just need to know it every once and a while but once again thank you for your review